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Well, this is a completely different kind of ghost story. Rather than the usual haunting, it gives us all a warning of what may come. I saw it coming the moment Mr. Kindley said that Clive was trying to warn Toby. That, and the rain. You forgot for Toby to ring his bell before the cave-in, by the way.
Thanks I'm glad you liked it:) I noticed that too about the bell but unfortunately I cannot change it as I've already deleted all the video files to free up space. On another topic I have sent you a new script
That was a grand story - some overtones of Dickens' 'The Signalman' by any chance, with the three warnings? You must be quite well researched to have included Elsie, the Wisbech & Upwell baggage van, who certainly didn't appear in the original Awdry stories about Toby and his line - indeed, the real van had long become a garden shed, or worse, when Awdry and Teddy Boston knew the W&U. Lovely.
I’ve seen your ghost stories since the beginning: they have all been very good, and it’s nice to see how far these have come: better audio and better models with better lighting. You don’t do too many stories about protagonistic ghosts. The last I can remember is The Banker in NRS Sudrian Railway Ghosts two. Maybe you can do the fourth story on a ghost train. Maybe one about a Ffarquar ghost that was one of the coffee pots that was scrapped in the engine shed where Thomas sleeps. Of course, the decision is yours, but I think my brief idea could be an interesting one. Keep up the good work! And of course, I must credit theburiedtruck for his great narration and voice acting.
Very lovely story! It felt better when Clive spoke as it didn't feel menacing as other ghost in the series. I hope u will incorporate this in a few future projects ;)
I love how this ghost was kind just like the first one with Percy and the letters, it was nice how Percy,,Daisy,& Toby each got a story to themselves, it’s nice how thomas didn’t get the spotlight like he usually does, if your going to continue this I would recommend about having Bertie as the main character
You know its nice to see a ghost story with a happy ending, normally we see the area taken down or avoided so its nice to have an ending such as this, good job my friend. Some scenes were abit laggy but didnt spoil the video. I must ask mate and I hope you can find a few moments in your time to reply but where and who made that awesome haunted Henry theme?
Hey ShunterProductions I have a idea for your next haunted tale and its called "the sinking phantom engine" and its about Rosie sees a ghost engine by the coastline near the lighthouse
Mid way it was scary, then after the Mr Kindly story, it became somehow sad :( Like with NWR1991narrated A figure in the Tunnel, I became sad too :( IDK why, but I gets sad rather than chilled :(
I know that the NRS is going to be rebooted soon and done in PDF but are there any plans for one last story for this book? I think it would be nice way to end off on as your ghost stories were definitely the most popular and I think it would be a good way to inform everyone that the series is getting rebooted.
