this was brilliant The additional comedic dialogue you gave to the Trucks made this all the more enjoyable, as for the crash; for something that seems so normal, it was made all the more serious and “frightening” with the shriek !! You have done a wonderful job with this segment and I honestly couldn’t be prouder, I wonder what’ll await us at the next door. Only time will tell !!
Marvellous story, very well written and edited, definitely in the spirit of the railway series - one of my favourite RWS styled stories for a long while. I really like how you’ve characterised Bert as this gruff, blunt but friendly and hard working engine - a true industrial tank. Also keen to see stories about our new locomotive. I LOVE the J50s, and I can’t wait to see what amazing stories you come up with next, keep up the amazing work!
Yes! I'm so excited! Chara is releasing a story about Johnson and then your releasing this on the same day! 2 amazing episode from 2 different series in 1 day! Looking forward to this!
now im extremely curious as to what dodge was planning with those tools, guessing splatter or another sorta diesel is going to appear later on to continue that job in secret
I actually recognize the end credits must music it is a variation of "Layton's Theme" from the professor layton games, a true gentleman would now this music, besides that love the work and look forward to see what you bring to us down the line.
I'm more of a fan of Ace Attorney, It was in Professor Layton Vs Ace Attorney so it doesn't surprise me that people noticed it. and I have a lot more planned, so I'm not stopping at this
Okay, so I was wrong about Dodge. Great job on this book. However, I would suggest you lower the volume on the music and sound effects in future, as I could barely or hardly hear what the characters were saying. Think you can put up some subtitles in the meantime? Rob's a good name for an engine.
