for a first song this is pretty good! altough my personal opinion is that 1. Cut down on some of autotune, its very much for a song. 2. The lyrics could use some work, theres not really rhyming in the original parts. other than that this is pretty well made!
Upon Hearing it again and as mush as it is indeed a Pretty Good First Impression... there's some work to be Done ngl, those 2 points are legit... especially the first point Overall, it's still alright... there's always room for improvement
my theory on who's singing this song 0:14 the gang excluding eyesaur and flumpty 0:44 flumpty 1:14 eyesaur 1:28 flumpty 1:58 the gang excluding eyesaur and flumpty 2:12 golden blam
this song is very wonderful and very detailed i think the MM will be in a very dark way because of the office changing every time flumpty sings good job Adam.
6 things i notice watching this song 0:08 this font looks awkardly like onaf 4's font you know the game that onaf mm is a sequel to 0:14 the lyric font's color is blue and blue indacates its a cold place 0:44 the font goes red when flumpty sing proveing that flumpty is a MONSTER! 0:45 all the gang are dead again coal monster frostyman are maybe dead next furneced 0:46 phantom eyesaur and yolkface might just hid into there places considering there ghosts & ghosts don't die 2:27 i asumeing this is golden blam's doing because golden flumpty is dead am i correct?
lyrics: you can't hide from flumpty me: onaf 1 DOORS onaf 2 LIGHT OFF onaf 3 FLASH owaf LAZERS onaf mm SNOWBALLS onaf 4 SOUND it appears you can hide from flumpty
For your 1st Song... pretty Neat overall, very fitting to the themes and tones of ONAF, and intertwines quite well with the Eleggtroswing Song from ONAF 3 in terms of Strange Songs from ONAF Series, also I do like some callbacks with some lyrics with a Reference to ONAF 2
He said that i can't hide but i can. Remember about One Night at Flumpty's 2 you had to turn of the Lights so Flumpty and his Friends will not see you so i'll just turn off the Lights and he can't find Me. A Lightswitsh is in the Left side by the Door. Flumpty will also not kill me cause he dosn't want to be a Cheater so 👍
0:44 flumpty: i killed all my friends (evil laugh) phantom eyesaur and phantom yolk face: ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-oHC1230OpOg.html