Sorry i haven't upload anything yet cause i got very busy last few weeks so... yeah... but dont worry im still uploading some vids especially part 2 and maybe soon ill be bloging on monday so yeah!! I hope you guys enjoy the vid!!!!
Wait, the boy that was moving that day that day they were 12 because it said that the girl with blue hair was 18 so she was 12 when the boy was moving!?
Welcome to the panic room, (girl who is dating Klara’s boyfriend/ex) Klara *Shows cute monster* Girl who datin that cheater AHHH Klara - Welcome to the panic room, Ex. *shows scary monster* Me - Well that makes it fair.He did cheat on you.
Okay no hate just criticism, ( this is all my opinion) So you're gonna traumatize this guy because... he cheated on you...? Why...? You're letting him win by letting him get to you, I don't get it, I know you aren't gonna redo this series, but maybe, if you were to do something similar, you could take some of my advice and change up the story. Leading me to my next point Story: It's kinda cliche to make someone cheat on you, maybe start a story off with something less unoriginal, a friend betrayed her, perhaps, it's kind of unclear why you would physically and emotionally traumatize this person, in okay with imagination and creativity, but only really insane people will look at someone who cheated on them and think "YEP I'M GONNA TRAUMATIZE EM AND TURN INTO A DEMON." Maybe my guy had his own things going on, maybe he wasn't happy. Oh well I'll go back to my corner Character design: ( this is completely my opinion) It says Ex Boyfriend and that makes me wonder, is she that clingy? No wonder he's dating another girl, if he's your ex, THEN LET HIM GO! Why do you have to hurt him, he did nothing but date someone after you broke up (in all seriousness, it said ex Boyfriend before she found out he was cheating, you should have put Boyfriend before, then when she saw them kissing change his name to Ex boyfriend) Song: Personally I love the song "Panic Room" but I think this wasn't the most fitting song (also opinion based) Character Design: Everyone but the mistress I feel was okay, for the mistress ( Ariana) Her outfit was really stereotypical, pink, purple, and a bunny... Seriously look up gacha bully, you will see similarities, anyway, thanks for coming to my Ted Talk, I'll go back to my corner.