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You have no idea how helpful your videos have been. Just one request, could you provide us with an explanation for the whole layout of a CAE essay? If it is not too much to ask. Thanks a lot.
Hi Victor, thank you so much. You will pass that exam before I finish--the videos take a month or two...I searched and found a link that explains the structure very well with excellent, clear examples: www.rubenvalero.com/english/content/cae-essay Read each prompt, then the example essay. Focus especially on the topic sentence of each paragraph in the example essay--that sentence tells what is in that paragraph.
Very helpful. This is helped me study detail sentences. Do you have any tips on how to write an effective narrative and analytical essay? I will be taking my Cbest in a week.
Thankyou very much for your time, spending that much detail to explain the paragraph in very understandable way ,easy to follow l really appreciated for your time thanks again .
Thank you very much , i live in Germany and this video is very helpful because i write on Wedneday a test and i have to write paragraphs and topic sentencens . Thank you . ( sorry about my bad english im in class 7 )
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Hello. My name is Rosmina Zuchri lived In Indonesia. Your thema very good. But I dont hear your voice .yes i use headset but still very slow your voice. Hope will very good future time.
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One doubt, you said that the Conclusion sentence does not gives new details. But in the sentence, "As a result of her hard work, Anna is one of the best students in school", gives additional information that she is hard working, which was not provided earlier. Then how is that a Conclusion Statement and not a detail statement? Also, there is one more detail that she is one of the best students in school, which was not conveyed earlier. Coz just being excellent does not means she is one of the bet, if all other students are also excellent. This is my confusion. Please help.
Manish, this is a good point! I should have said it this way: "In the conclusion we can’t add a completely new detail or idea." So, in the example of Anna, we can’t say something in the conclusion like this: “Anna is a great student and a wonderful person” because “wonderful person” is a completely new detail. It is not linked to anything before it. But also, in the conclusion, we can't repeat the wording of any previous detail too closely! So we have to change the wording of the fact/idea/detail that we reference in the conclusion. One way to do this is to make the wording more general, stronger, or show a slightly new side of that detail/fact/idea-but not so new that it becomes a whole new fact or idea. So, in the example conclusion, we do this with two ideas: #1 Anna does her homework everyday…this is an example of working hard. So, using “hard work” in the conclusion is more general wording. This is fine-because we’ve made it clear how she worked hard (through homework, getting herself ready on time, etc). #2 Anna is an excellent student…this idea was introduced the topic sentence. The conclusion makes this idea even stronger by saying she’s one of the best students in school. I do see what you mean that there is a new detail due to the comparison with other students-since this detail builds on an idea strongly supported and already previously introduced, that’s ok…a new detail that would NOT be ok would be to say “Anna is also one of the kindest students in school.” (But my original wording did not include this nuance--so I am glad you asked!)
@@EnglishUnits Right.. Now I get that.. Now its clear what makes up New Information or Detail. Thank you for your reply. Your videos are very helpful, and easy to learn from, just watching once is enough and everything is transferred to the memory nicely. Thanks again. Best wishes for your upcoming projects. Looking forward to new videos... Take care, Cheers!!
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