This is really interesting. If you’re planning on every episode in full length then hats off to you that’s very ambitious! I would suggest, so it doesn’t feel like I’m just watching the episode sized down, to add dialogue. It doesn’t have to be a lot but a few comments here and there, maybe mini discussions? I mean if Virgil is here and we know he didn’t get along with the light sides at this time due to him being a dark side, play into that! Add character to the characters.
Yeah I realised after I made it that I did absolutely no dialogue and interactions between the sides- I must find this episode a bit difficult to make discussions with because I did the same when I tried to remake it- I just couldn’t find a time for dialogue. Thank you for the critique:)
