Persian Miniature Art - a Story of Master and Student 

Thanks for your note, it's very important. Is it just the timing wrong, or the translation itself is incorrect? We'll get a second round of translation now, to fix the inaccuracies.

@@Peryferie Thanks for the kind response. For example, the first couple of sentences before he introduces himself have some issues. Then e.g. at about 1:15 when he says he is 'amazed', I think it's better to use the word 'interested'; also it's better to put this word near the end of the monologue where the speaker actually says it. This way, I sense that this video was translated paragraph by paragraph on a manuscript, where the sentences are translated and re-ordered and got out of sync with the bit being spoken. There are a couple of places where the translation can be improved. I didn't pay close attention while viewing the first time due to having little time. But I could dedicate a time to work on a translation for you if you want to. Edit: also at 1:11 "financial aspect" is better instead of "financial reason"

@@threefour1598 Understood, thanks for your help, we'll work on fixing these issues. thanks for the note!

i stopped reading the subtitles after the master painter said he does "nagashiye irani" (Iranian painting) was translated to "Miniature painter".

It also crossed my mind that they don't seem Iranian. I don't know why

@@threefour1598 because from 9th to 18th century Mongols and Turks ruled Iran. But that is in the past. I think Miniature art should reflect facecs families to Iraniams.