Okay, I'm just giving advice. I don't know much but I feel like it would make it better if maybe you didn't add a picture of another girl when Y/n is talking? It makes it less feely for me. But it's your choice I guess.
@@ak5710 😂😂 Dont worry....I absolutely love making hp povs but the main reason I wanted to start Peter and Y/n is because lately along with Hp povs i kinda got obsessed with Peter Parker povs....So yea...😂❤️
Ok let me just say this once... This is a mistake everyone makes... If I'm a Stark I shouldn't have powers... Tony doesn't he just has a heart of Iron and that's not a power.