Very very close good job on that but I do have a few things measure 26 should be a FF not F, at 43 with the 3 bar hold it should be 7 not 3, 68 with the 2 bar hold it should be 3, 156 the note change for all people who change notes should start at the beginning of the crescendo not the end, at 199 the 3 bar rest should be 7 not 3.
i got all of the bar rests correct as far as I know, and I spent a while checking those. I published this without editing the individual parts, so all of the errors are in dynamics, notes, and tempo markings
adding on to this, since I wrote this I've attended two PR camps so I now understand how jd writes his dynamic markings on hits, so with any transcription I do in the future I will be applying what I know from that