Okay, when it got to explaining how she got her cutie mark, and what the other version of herself did, I got a sinking pit in my stomach. I feel like this is a case of DID (Dissociative Identity Disorder). What the colts did to her damaged her psyche so much that she formed an alter who would take over in situations she couldn't handle, and then they started to cause harm to other ponies when she couldn't control her body. That would be a terrifying thing, especially to wake up without proper recollection, in front of a bloody corpse. It makes sense though. Some alters can even cause the person harm, rather than help them, and often times people won't even be aware they're DID, they just think they're crazy, with gaps in their memory, and stuff like that. I get chills listening to the 'sane' Screw loose. (I feel bad not having a name for the possible alter...)
@@babyblue_22 no not really. With DID, every alter is a completely different person with a different name, personality, ect. The alters share a body, but they are all different, fully formed people
This is the first of your dark fics that I've listened to, and I'm honestly impressed. I enjoy reading horror stories and the like, so I wasn't expecting this to 'wow' me. Then the creepy "la la" music started, and you didn't just read the character, you *acted* her out. As much as I enjoy reading and letting my imagination fill in the gaps, I have to admit that a proper performance is amazing. Thank you.
It was also really amazing how the listener (or at least I), went through 3 phases: 1. I thought Screw Loose was a basket case and a bit stupid (in short I didn't like her). 2. I realize that she's actually an alternate personality (like Gollum and Smeagol) so therefor I have more compassion for her. 3. The next time S.L appears, I realize it's a coping mechanism to deal with the abuse of her captors. Therefor it becomes much creepier the second time.
I really find it great how fans of mlp can make an character from the show have a dark life :'/ this made me feel so bad. I think I have a new favorite character.
This story is rather stirring... I give you my compliance, it is now 01:03 in the morning, it's like a book I can't put down. This is amazing, I owe you hugs! (Please excuse the weirdness, I am tired.)
@@babyblue_22 Should've been clearer, I think I meant before that By the way it's been 8 months, I genuinely forgot I even watched this and what happened lmfao
OMG! That was amazing! Horrible and sad, and it shatters my picturesque view of eqestria. It's just as dark there as it is here. Luv 2 u Skew! hang in there, oh god, Please, keep holding on.
Who hit you Screw!?!?! I will get them alright screw just tell me their names and how they look like? After this you will no longer have them beat you up or other things!!!
Me: im going to crazy practice Doctor: he ceeps thinking this is some sort of practice ceep him in for another 2 weeks Me: alright im done this practice
I think Pinkie Pie is Harley Quinn. The other crazy ponies aren't competent enough to survive fights with the law, goons, super heroes, and super villains. At least Pinkie hasn't gotten her hooves on a cancer ray. Edit: Cancer ray: ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-QJZkx6huor0.html
This fic reminded me a little of the movie 'The Brave One' in which Jodie Foster plays a woman who gets savagely beaten along with her husband (who dies in the hospital). She goes kind of crazy, and starts dealing out her own brand of justice to criminals. The line where it talked about 'waking up and finding dead ponies, and being covered in dried blood' unless I misunderstood it, seemed like a less well thought out version of that. It also makes me think of Lisbeth Salandar in some ways.
I love cute things like MLP, puppies, kittens, and rainbows i also like creepypasta, outlast, horror games and things that would usually keep normal up at night and this is there something wrong with me? *Naaahhh!*
Earrie Rayne Well in Skyrim I kill everyone who doesn't benefit me and even of those sometimes I kill them as well I make pacts with Devil's and Angels for more power...power for which to kill more and more though in real life I'm quite kind and helpful.....is there something wrong with me.
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