Fantastic job really liked the guitar playing one small quibble when the lyrics go "are you lonely just like me " "MERCY" Don't leave that word out it's important!! Otherwise I can't wait to check out more of your videos as I think your very talented!!
The word mercy is not strictly part of the song, it's an interjection. When a woman does a song which is written from a man's point of view, she is free to adapt the song as she sees fit - this particular style of delivery would hardly suit an attempt at big Roy's brilliant "mercy" or the growl. I can see that your advice is well meant, but I have to disagree, as you can see !