script is very week , no relation with each scene story is realy very poor, bcz in pakistan if we saw other drama's so it cant compete with punjabi and pushto drama's out door nothing otherwise good attepmt overall with low budget...
It seems that your are a writer, or a director because you have amazing knowledge of script and production. So why not you should make a Tele-film that should have sense with scene and wonderful script. Plz don't criticize, its a small comedy drama we enjoy it which was the purpose, you can give your such remakes on the Film or movie of bollywood, hollywood etc.
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