I like having a different angle to view the jacket at the end, other than the vlog selfie mode. And the pic of the water beading off the jacket too. I don't like that you don't have a separate mic, for the distant recording at the end, and the wind that made noise during the walking vlog. There's very cheap ones that work nicely like even 1£ ones with a wind shielding puffy thing. I think rehearsing what you'll say while walking is great but that you should not include most of it in the finished video (or at least add subtitles to apologize for the wind noise, it's nice to acknowledge viewers that way). Thumbnail and titles are attention getters and no one gets angry at a hiperbolic question (as long as you answer it) like "BEST JACKET OF 2023?!"
Thanks for the feed back. I’ve a separate mic with a dead cat now but didn’t at the time of filming this. It’s all a learning curve making this content but hopefully it will improve the longer I make them. Thanks again for watching and commenting 👍