I really like how these extended highlights are done as they feel substantial enough to capture the feel of the race. However, I would recommend adding the series standings at the end so we can see how things stack up after the events.
What if you put their names on the screen when you are showing them individually and from time to time show a leaderboard? That would be much easier than trying to make sense of the rushed and garbled back and forth of names flying this way and that in overlapping conversation.
