REACTING TO YOUR FIRST SENTENCES! giving feedback + lowkey fangirling over my subscriber's books

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@beeatjovinlops4299 Год назад

Ana your reaction to my sentence has had me grinning since I saw it. Talk about a confidence boost! I think it’s time for me to get off my writing break 😊 thanks Ana. (Also everyone else’s sentences?! Dang when are y’all publishing where can I read these)

@lifrulz05 Год назад

nawh that was pretty good, It gets us keep reading and asking the question "Why isnt the sun setting", " I wonder what exactly happened", etc. It gets us keep reading because you are wondering WHY the sun isnt setting. 100% pretty good, have you exactly published it? Even tho, Im not much of a reader but I love writing for some reason, I'd definitely read it!

@beeatjovinlops4299 Год назад

@@lifrulz05thank you so much!! No, I haven’t published (yet), but I am nearing the end of the first draft, which is really exciting! Your words make me really want to keep going, thank you 😊

@DerpySleepyhead Год назад

@@beeatjovinlops4299 Oo good luck! I hope you finish it soon! I want to write my own novel since I’m good at writing but rn I can’t come up with a good idea that I think people will find interesting. I would definitely read it if u publish it someday

@erzsieke Год назад

@@beeatjovinlops4299 oooooh good luck!

@taliw7736 7 месяцев назад

same!!! keep going :)

@Clxxdyyyyyyy Год назад

A lot of people have told me the first sentence is important since a lot of booktok stuff is like "telling u the first line to convince you to read it" so keep it in mind

@Numbll 9 месяцев назад

is it the prologue or chapter 1?

@miodaiu 3 месяца назад

bfr, the first sentence doesn't matter. nobody's getting hooked on a first sentence. first paragraph or page, maybe, but a sentence?? 😭🙏

@harmonyeden._xo Год назад

this is mine... "The fire happened years ago, but Hestia still smelt smoke." i changed it after i posted on the community tab but luckily i didn't get picked.

@The._cardigans Год назад

you commented this ages ago but this honestly stopped me in my tracks, amazing job omg💕

@ButterandBrownies07 4 месяца назад

Whyyyy??? Why would you change such a cool first line if I wrote something as beautiful as this I'll keep my head high , be so confident and happy as though I am the best writer😂😂

@Mel0.maniiac 16 дней назад

Hestia is a GENIUS name, the Greek mythology fan in me is applauding you.

@Mel0.maniiac 16 дней назад

LMAO i just now realized that this video was made a year ago

@nyushka_lo Год назад

5:30 OMG THAT'S ME!!! It's been like three months since this video came out and only now do I realise that Ana read my line, after a very awkward discord interaction where people thought I stole my own line 😂 all ended well tho, so it's fine. BUT I GOT GOOD FEEDBACK FROM FREAKING ANA NEU!! I can die in peace now.

@nightmarewolf6683 Год назад

AHHHHH I wish I could've gotten mine in, but here it is, "So violently did she know the world. To be made of flesh was pure humiliation, so to free others was what she called it, the death and conquering of their sins. But there was no god, the general knew it well, but what she said to reassure herself was of no concern, what lay before her was." Apologies if it's a bit long XD

@anonymouscreater5042 Год назад

Wow😲 this character sounds like they have been through a lot, very compelling first sentence btw👍

@anonymouscreater5042 Год назад

Oh my gosh! Everyone had such intriguing first sentences they make me want to strive for more knowledge of these literary works of art.❤️✨❤️✨❤️ And Ana I would love a part two!😊👍

@tseritykat404 Год назад

Omg all of these first sentences are sending literal chills! Y'all are very talented writers with beautiful writing ✨💖 I would love a part two! This was so fun to see other people's writing

@Muslimah_4_Life Год назад

Same!

@peachtea7269 Год назад

I didn't even submit for the video but here's the beginning of one of my many little stories I do lmao "Amelia had heard the news. One doesn't often receive the news that your brother is a mass murderer."

@suziesheep2850 Год назад

When do you publish, holy fuck

@peachtea7269 Год назад

@@suziesheep2850 oh I jusr saw fhis! Eventually lol, I jusr write for sillies

@jojogodtier 9 месяцев назад

Published yet holy shit

@peachtea7269 9 месяцев назад

@@jojogodtier nope, I just write for fun!! thanks :)

@noelle_reads_alot 9 месяцев назад

I need this book in my hands

@reezers101 Год назад

Those sentences were so cool, I can't wait to read the full books! And yes, Part 2 please!!!

@keirareid6720 Год назад

Never got picked but woah! It’s incredible how a single string of words can lead to so many questions and wonder

@starstickermars Год назад

Ah girl please keep doing these! I enjoy watching them so much, everyone comes up with such amazing first sentences and they all give me so much inspiration

@myttzzie Год назад

Part 2 please! I would love to see the others! These books seem so intriguing and I cant wait for whenever they actually debut for public audiences (if they do)!

@YazzyFairy Год назад

All those sentences are so beautiful and creative that inspired me to come up with my own! 🤩✨

@novtyr 8 месяцев назад

I know this is pretty late, but here's the first line of a short story I'm working on: "Everything around me, from the soothing crashing of waves against shore to the chill autumn breeze slowed down as time reluctantly came to a halt, compelled by Death’s silent command."

@ButterandBrownies07 4 месяца назад

Oh my .. I'm already in love . The way you just described the environment is so calming yet unsettling I loved it ✨

@meganelste5410 Год назад

Here’s mine for a character backstory for d&d, “Andromeda looked up to the stars. The stars remind her she isn’t alone and as long as they are lit, she will find her brother.”

@ruby-core.1221 11 месяцев назад

HOLY CRAP THATS PRETTY

@saharadessert8917 Год назад

Here is the first paragraph of my current WIP, "Sea Monster". (It's going to end up being a series called Living Legends: Sea Monster, Land Monster, Sky Monster, Space Monster) "Water swished. Small fish fled for their life as the large creature loomed above. The Great White snapped his jaws shut over eight of them. Blood fell off of his teeth and floated away into the sea. He felt the water stir against his gills harshly. Sea Monster."

@hannahl.4494 7 месяцев назад

"The sun hadn't set in four days" just reminds me of summer in northern Scandinavia. The sun actually doesn't set. Just like it doesn't rise at all during a period in the winter. In the parts that are north of the polar circle.

@TheAceCorporation 7 месяцев назад

Here's mine: (it might be bad I'm quite a young and inexperienced writer) What if you could freeze time? Everyone has an idea for what they’d want to do. One day, I got the opportunity to put that plan into action. The story is called Time Freeze.

@NTD000 Год назад

I love the sentences! And the vibe this video gives me. Such comfort❤️

@Bo_M Год назад

One of my favorite first lines is that from notes from the underground. It begins like this: "I'm a sick man . . . a spiteful man . . . an unattractive man, that's what I am. " like you immediately begin to wonder why he thinks that.

@lonzseg25 Год назад

Omg this is soo good! I’ve been having writers block 😢 but ur videos help so much! I LOVE THESE❤❤❤

@averylambert8360 10 месяцев назад

Mine is “without my journal I forget who I was” And it needs some work, but the plot it that people have their memories wiped as currency after all economy was destroyed and people write in journals so they can remember themselves after they rid their memories (bare bones plot summary)

@whxmsii Год назад

No, I missed my chance 😭 part two please! If its not too much!

@mistycupcake2921 Год назад

Same 😭 hopefully she makes another one but I would probably miss that too

@4nS0Gaming Год назад

15 secs ago what the heck :O ngl I'm sooo excited to watch this, I love to see other peoples first sentences so much y'all don't even know 😩❤️ Lil update: I love Ana's reactions to y'all's first sentences 😭😭😭

@totallynotanauthor 6 месяцев назад

Mine was (Blood Oath of Gold (Wattpad)) “My son,” King Minan, ruler of the Kingdom of Gold demanded, “please, step forward.” That was just the prologue, it's my favourite part of the book so far! It isn't as cool as everyone elses' but it's pretty okay. Chapter one is “Don’t even try to escape, little one, I won’t kill you. It is dishonourable.”

@ButterandBrownies07 4 месяца назад

Oh god I really love that name!!! Blood oath of God that starts with his majesty telling his son to come forward.. gosh you all are so creative.. when are you going to publish this?? Is it available in offline as a book??? Sh*t I am curious to know!!!!!!!

@cherriberriarts Год назад

Yesss! These are so amazing that there needs to be a part 2!

@Piscesmoon-e9b Год назад

These lines are so beautiful omg mine feels so basic

@spicypumpkins2640 Год назад

This was amazing. Had goosebumps throughout the video. These first lines are phenomenal and inspiring and had me wanting to know what happened next.

@wrennie1532 8 месяцев назад

"She ran her fingers through her matted, oily hair in the sunless room. They sat almost shoulder to shoulder, and it stank of sweat and bodily fluids. She didn't know how long she had been here- a week seemed too short, a month? Two months? All she knew was that her hair was noticably longer." C:

@Gruger42069 10 месяцев назад

As I lie in the soft snow with fresh wounds, I contemplate whether to lie here and wait for an even icier embrace, my father is not a kind man. That I've known all my life, and I can put all that behind me if I close my eyes. Just started creative writing again so this is my first attempt in a while

@ray_ban123 Год назад

Omg I just found your channel and Im already in love with everything❤ Its so good to have a channel about writing and I wanted to thank you for doing this and motivating a lot of people to write.

@Evybooks Год назад

and ''the clouds stitched against the night sky.'' sentence is in the opening paragraph of Crescent dark too. (secretly just for you).

@ananeu Год назад

hehe❤

@Ellahamiltonn Год назад

You have inspired me so much Ana I love your account 😭😭🤧🤧

@erdondiamir436 6 месяцев назад

The first paragraph from debut fantasy revenge: Someone was sitting on the throne. But it wasn't the king. It was the beginning of a reign that would shake the kingdom to its core. The subjugated area was a graveyard by now, bodies scattered everywhere while a warrior was brought on top of the hanging device. Several men hung him on a rope, his bloodstained black hair dangling down from his head, as if it was trembling with fear. The bestowed throne was seated by a maniac, his red eyes glowing of pleasure. The warrior caressed the silk rope with his palm, reassuring himself that everything will be okay. The fear of the warriors were in rhythm with a few men chanting slurs towards the people of the opposing side, but what could they do? All of them were tied up to the same, tight rope. The to-be-beheaded warrior’s screams were muffled as the men also put a layer of strong cloth onto his mouth. Mere seconds away from his death, the warrior’s eyes glowed a shade of red, orange, yellow, green, blue, indigo, and violet at the same time, displaying the colors of the rainbow in his iris. But the countdown stopped. Why? Because on certain times, a rainbow doesn’t mean good luck. Thank you for the reaction video Ana, please review this!

@Maddie-gj4dy 4 месяца назад

I don’t really read fantasy but wow you’re a great writer.

@mariageorgieva5418 Год назад

Hiiiiii I love your videos. Keep goinggg

@yessica5231 Год назад

the only thing i dislike about these lines is that I need to read the whole work now lol

@jaschagysin3277 Год назад

That was so cool to look at. Seeing all of these beautifull sentences made me so happy to be subscribed to this channel🥳☺️🦄

@LetMeClairify Год назад

You should totally make another video like this!

@mahanadamukherjee3415 Год назад

Currently, the first sentence of my book rests at: "They're going to find out within a month. Tick tock, tick tock." And that's all that's there in the prologue and it immediately jumps to a scene of my protagonist's daily life. She sits on a big secret, but even she doesn't know the real secret. But those lines will keep you on your toes to learn that secret.

@pasdedi Год назад

OMG! I got so exited when I saw u posted this video! These are my favourite type😁😁😉 Haven't started writing my book yet, still in the planning stages😊😊

@briellejunee Год назад

Missed the community post but here is my first sentence! "Metal against metal clanked together, echoing throughout the large training room." Don't want to add the rest as it reveals my character's names lol. But it is the first sentence of my WIP.

@SundaydoesArt Год назад

Aaaa I keep missing them but uh the opening for my book is meant to be ominous and is clearly not spoken by the main character as it seems to be talking to him, it also is very off-putting compared to the rest of the book so far. This is also my first project, It also is a line that continues at the end of the book (aka you wont know what the end of the line is until its over so hahaha). I also am not many chapters in so far so yeah, but here it is "Some changes will be made. You may not even realize it at first, my dear Theseus. But things will change," I might change it but yeahhh. At the end of the line it just starts with the main book but yes, very proud of this, sorry I talked so much

@netflixchaos 8 месяцев назад

This is mine. “It wasn’t my blood” “But It was his.”

@alyssanelson7437 Год назад

I missed getting mine in so here it is. Why did he have to be gone? Why? Maggie thought as she sat in the hard wooden pew trying not to hear the priest’s words. If she heard, she knew she would probably start crying, and she didn’t want to cry; but she couldn’t just sit there, so she had to listen to what the priest was saying about her father.

@pattyellis5359 Год назад

Hi again. Yea, why not? I would love you to do another vlog with different parts from our books in the 1 liner.

@emmanuellaeledu 8 месяцев назад

You inspire me, dear Ana ❤!

@ButterandBrownies07 4 месяца назад

Not me trying very hard to stop my brain from stealing thses lines because god they are so pretty!!

@The_ragdoll_fam 9 месяцев назад

this is mine "its funny how 'nobody' isn't really a description. its more off an opinion that people follow."

@yo-dx6ee Год назад

ahh im late, please do a part 2 😭

@Pie-nc6lt Год назад

omg, i love to be included!! T^T

@frostyhannah Год назад

I know I'm two months late but Just for fun this is my first sentence. “Are you awake?” Kenneth heard a soft-spoken but high-pitched voice ask. He opened his eyes to an unfamiliar sight. Please do another one of these videos so you can see mine

@thatreadinggirll 10 месяцев назад

This is mine: Most stories you hear have an happy ending, not ours though. We were children, not heroes, and our story was never even meant to end..

@Takarr 9 месяцев назад

Awesome mate

@ButterandBrownies07 4 месяца назад

You have my heart bestie.. for a second I thought " Aah! Atleast someone who starts stories like me " . I really love the way you wrote and yeah it's not good to not write your story's name when you drop such a pretty line...

@thatreadinggirll 4 месяца назад

@@ButterandBrownies07 ahaha, thxx alot. It's in Dutch tho, and farrr from finished

@ButterandBrownies07 4 месяца назад

@@thatreadinggirll doesn't matter imma rooting for ya!!!

@Phantom_Fireside Год назад

Yes please to a part 2

@strawberrymilk2987 Год назад

AHHHHHHHHH you picked mine! Thank you thank you thank you! 💖😁

@suziesheep2850 Год назад

I was late for this, but here's what I would've wrote anyway: "I stand and watch as my own mother gets lowered into the ground."

@arri389 Год назад

these are amazing!!!! (and I'd l o v e a part 2)

@ItsMeAgain-1 Год назад

Hey, part 2? I didn't know this was happening but I love all those lines!

@comsy 11 месяцев назад

can there be a part two? i missed this because i wasn't in your community back then

@childofgod5945 Год назад

These are all so amazing!!! Mine is also short but idk how good it is XD.

@valmelvis Год назад

I loved some of these, they were really good and also the last one made me just think about how much Jesus does actaully love me and you and your neighbor and all of us and how selfless that love is.

@Icey-698 11 месяцев назад

I'm a hopeless romantic and the 2nd already made me cry XDX

@kinggraham5183 3 месяца назад

Bro was just fangirling but im here for it

@wangamokgoko5273 Год назад

Ohhhh my gosh I didn't see this I hope I can put my line in the next video

@okokalito Год назад

Part 2 please!

@mettabel8097 Год назад

7:43 oh my gosh, I was not expecting you to read my first sentence 😂 Thank you so much for the feedback 🤍 and thank you so much for this video

@ButterandBrownies07 4 месяца назад

Oh gosh so it was yours !! can you tell me the name of your story ? Can you tell me where I can read it?? I loved it so much the name nala is really super cool and the way you dropped her name in between the sentense so effortlessly.. and they way you .... Aaahhhhh just gimme the name of you story I am dying to know!!

@mettabel8097 4 месяца назад

@@ButterandBrownies07 hi 👋🏾. Aww thank you so much for the reply, it warms my heart to know that someone liked my line As of right now, I have put that project on hold. It was called project treasure and it was an African inspired fantasy story about 3 teenagers looking for an ancient treasure that would help them solve their problems. I didn’t feel like I was connecting with that storyline, so I stopped writing it. I am however currently working on an updated version of that story and world in a dystopian fantasy setting. The characters are a bit older and mature and I am handling more serious themes in it. I’m still in the plotting/drafting process for that book but I’m hoping I’ll be done with the first draft by the end of the year. I don’t really have anywhere I post my stories though, I thought of using Wattpad but I’ve decided against it. I’m thinking of starting a blog to post my writings. Let me know if you’d be interested in seeing that.

@starriw-l2f 6 месяцев назад

i wish i could've had gotten mine in, you're like a professional fangirlist ana hahaha

@safi2665 Год назад

GUYS I WANT TO READ YOUR BOOKS! PUBLISH THEM

@thegeezers7723 Год назад

In the dark gloomy street,on a bouncy hill next to a bus station.

@ananoir Год назад

is your discord still available? i would love to join it!

@Tomgaming-hh4kn Год назад

Pls can you do more I would absolutely love to share mine with you ps your amazing

@Jadeitewrites Год назад

I love this video soo much! I hope you will be able to make more of this kind of videos because it honestly makes my way. However, since you did not read my sentence, i hope you can still react to it. So, this is my first sentence: the lake eats people. And that's all you need to know.

@suziesheep2850 Год назад

When do you publish? I need to know.

@JackMichaelPeterM Месяц назад

They all can’t be good!

@leonthelad3208 Год назад

6:05 It's me! Your words were so kind :D I'm glad you liked my first line!

@taliw7736 7 месяцев назад

Wow amazing guys!!!

@Booklover-Iris 2 месяца назад

Clara grunts, grabbing Klam, putting her calf to his shin and throwing him over her leg, “now that's what you call a tai otoshi” Clara boasts, “that's what you can do? Should I be scared?” Klam playfully questions, Clara grabs his hand and helps him up, “I’ll be able to protect our squad!” she says, punching the air, making sure her punches are straight and strong, “You don’t need to protect EVERYONE, at least yourself included” Klam says, giggling at her confidence, “hey, don’t laugh” Clara says, looking at the time, “We’re late for school!” she yells, rushing, “Calm down, we’ll be fine-“ “We have a TEST!” She yells, dragging him towards the school and going to her locker, by luck, it was just a few minutes before class, “See? We’re here, can’t you chill, school isn’t that important” Klam says, rolling his eyes “Well, unlike you, I want an education, so I’m not skipping school because ‘boo hoo I’m so lazy’” Clara says mockingly “I’m not lazy, just, uhm…. prone to being tired” Klam says with a shrug “Totally” Clara rolls her eyes “At least I have goals” she mutters (I think I shouldn't have rushed it)

@Sim.ilarlyrose 2 месяца назад

I want to share mine too! 😊 “Milo stepped out of the car and looked up at the dusty building that was now considered his new home, Ashbrook Orphanage.

@portiadecamp9631 Год назад

Please make a part two!!! I would love to submit mine to see what you say!!!

@thegeezers7723 Год назад

this video was cool

@daneoosthuizen3099 Год назад

Sorry for me not sending a sentence anyways here's mine: Henry was a 7-year-old boy;he was going through a misfortune,but why?

@jonathancooper5488 Год назад

I have a question... why did u stop doing rainbow loom things? did u not want to anymore and wanted to start this kinda stuff did it get boring what happened? :(

@chokingonmoss Год назад

i wasnt expecting to see mine 🥺 my heart ah

@Yuqi7X 2 месяца назад

Idk if this is good (pls give tips) But here’s mine: sometimes my nightmares make me think society hates me, but in my nightmares I see her

@strawberrymilk2987 Год назад

Off topic but have you watched ouran high school host club? I just saw your poster and I freaking love that anime!

@doubletrouble6789 4 месяца назад

Mine is: “All I could hear was the screaming of college students”

@comicalperfectionist.edu23 Год назад

Man, the video was SO useful since I was struggling to write the first sentence in my book. For those wondering... Anger lingered everywhere... She couldn't hold it. No, there was no way she could hold her anger. And she was me.

@mishcamahajan 4 месяца назад

I'm not a native English speaker, so I'm sorry if this sounds weird but do we say "She was me" or is it "She was I"? I'm learning English (Hope this doesn't come off as rude! I love the intrigue your lines gives!)

@phmo4519 Год назад

Wake up, eat go to school. at school: don’t do too well (smart=attention) but don’t do too bad (failing will get you labeled as a looser and outcast, labels=attention) what does attention equal you might ask…Death. This is the start of a book I’m writing that’s about a world baits on rolls in a book. So there’s the Main Character, side character and background characters. If someone fails to play their roll they’ll be executed. And my main character is a background character.

@marissabocanegra Год назад

Where can we summit I would love for you to read mine

@LinzeesBooks 3 месяца назад

This is mine (it’s draft 0 so it’s probably gonna change) “The blood spilled and stained the carpet that lied beneath my weak body”.

@noelle_reads_alot 9 месяцев назад

9:32 my half-blood senses are tingling

@miodaiu 3 месяца назад

greek mythology ❤❤❤❤❤❤

@AigaShoyouTobio Месяц назад

Percyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

@amiefgirl Год назад

Ok first of all this is my moms account but this is not me lol. But I know ana will probably never see this but I thought I would do my first sentence! :) "Libby Clampitt sat still, but her mind was far from it."

@annejia5382 Год назад

im so nervous, i just clicked play.................................

@noelle_reads_alot 9 месяцев назад

Mine is, “It’s been 2 years since I decided to jump of the helicopter and stay in the Texan Clan.”

@Lillian-j5o Месяц назад

Im making a writing thingy on wattpad and its going to be in third person, but focused on the villain. Everything that the villain does the narrator will try to justify and everything the heros do will be criticized. Eventually at the end of the book as the villain is put in jail, itll have him think about everything that happened and reveal that the narrator WAS the villain, and threaten you, the reader as if you were against him the entire time. Itll end with something like this "And YOU. yes you. I know you fcking exist, what, do you think im stupid? You think im a bad person, dont you? I dont care. I don't fcking care what you think. I know that everything ive done was justified. I dont need you. I didn't need my parents, i didn't need Charlie, i don't need ANYONE. Im going to get out of here and when i do all of you will regret not being by my side. Just you wait. "