same i felt like a jerk for not crying then i realized that a lot of peeps feel this way. it kinda made me wanna laugh because of the grammar. Edit: i know peeps isn’t an actual word. Ok?
Grammar, spelling, story. So she wasn't loved, she had a boyfriend and he cheats on her with her mom. Then, she jumps out a window and she only has 1 hour; the window probably wasn't that high. She says, 'I love you, too' after he was the partial reason for her death and she saw him cheat on her. Then, after 3 seconds, she dies. No, no, no, it wasn't 1hr, it was 5 seconds? Don't get me started on '
1.This has awful grammar plus her mom Is probably alot older than her boyfriend 2. So yeah also I think this is fake but idk So ok....... 3. Also the songs were not sad they were happy songs
I remember when I was really young like 6-10 and I used to watch stories in this format trying to make myself cry for some reason, and this is one of the videos I watched along with those sad my little pony videos. I have been looking for this for ages. I never cried to any of these videos but it’s hard to take them serious now at 16💀
No offense to all the people who cried, I'm no critique, however; I'm pretty sure we can all agree this story is clichéd in such a manner, the foreshadowing is done poorly, as we could all see it coming that her boyfriend would cheat on her somehow, and the excessive use of emoticons.
I've got a more sad story: Boy has no friends, he gets bullied for being gay, and not being like the other kids. He spends hours alone in his room, wasting away. He pretends he's fine to his family, but he's not sure how much longer he can cope. One day, at school he gets moved to the back of the class, and there's a girl that talks to him, acknowledges him. He instantly falls in love and spends his time getting to know her. She's so kind and amazing he thinks, but one day the seating plan is changed, and they are split apart. (if people read this and like I'll continue it, based on a real story)
Allimations did such a good job of explaining it. But here is my opinion in my words It wasn't very well written because of the grammar, spelling and punctuation. Like Allimations said it needs more depth. I would have liked to know if she had depression, her hobbies and all of that, and her name while you're at it. It looks rushed and looks like some last minute shower thoughts. Did her family hate her because she was autistic? Did she have any problems? Another thing you didn't mention, since this was only done in 2013, I hope you have had some improvements. I also hope that you remake this and add more meaning to the story. I hope somebody reads this!
that actually is the saddest story and it happened to me before 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 I FELT LIKE I WAS GONNA DIEEEE IT WAS HORRIBLE ......... HORRIBLE I TELL YOU 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😌😭😭😭😭😭
PurpleUnicornCat OMG SAME! Also there was just this really creepy noise in my closet (I know that has nothing to do with what we were just talking about 😂 Read more
Prob some tears with that. I just need something for my school project about how to treat relationships seriously because at my school it has gotten out of control. So many people with crushed hearts, but then the silent call of me (hoo i'm still single woot hoo hoo) XD No broken heart for me XD
Kishin of Chaos Also, for some reason I felt like the death was too rushed. I mean, she had an hour to live, but this just seemed like five or ten minutes to me.
Kiwigrey She already hated her mother and knew she would do things to hurt her but her boyfriend on the other hand cared for her and she had higher expectations for him than her mother.
i remember watching these at the age of 7 because i thought that they were interesting stories now i’m 16 and i’ve had most of these stories done to me
This is disgraceful, suicide is nothing like this and this makes me upset. My best freind.....SHE IS CUTTING HERSELF. I don't know what to do and I am scared. I can't help and she won't help me. I know that every night she cries and she is hurting... like today she casually talks about her being the next to die and I just can't anymore....I want to help but I cant, and this video isn't at all accurate about depression or suicide. God. I just can't.
Taylor The Greatest Gamer Call this number and tell them what she is doing: 1-800-273-8255. If she intervenes, tell the proper authorities to get the help that she needs. Good luck, and tell her that you love her, and everyone else loves her, and also remind her what she will miss. The Mysterious Stranger.
Tell her stop tell her suicide is a choice that just gets you into more pain I had a friend who did that and I spoke to her about after that the next day she came to me and bursted into tears and hugged me she said "Thank You I wouldn't know what to do if it wasn't for you"
@@dominusanuli3595 yus I finally found u and that is true mysterious stranger I have a gf who was suidal but I helped her through her depression and suicide thoughts
Doctor: she has 1 more hour to live. Boy: *runs into ward* Boy: I love you Girl: I love you too Girl again: *dies* Didn't the doc say she had an HOUR to live? Can someone explain to me how this happened in less than 5 minutes? Edit: He must run really slow
