I felt like crying when i got to know that Hobiy/n child died.imagine how much pain they must have felt. 😭😭😭 But I was also relieved that taekook's child is okay.you scared us author
Don't worry about the spelling or grammar, you do pretty good. Other than feeling sad at first it was a good story line and the bad guy paid for his evil deeds.
It was amazing I loved it I wish there was more and that mark could have felt what he did to yn and hobi by killing her baby Sometimes u need to feel pain that u dish out I love the smart mind u had for Taekook brilliant Can't wait for more Plz make it a bit longer it was just getting more interesting and then it ended so beautiful thx u for that😅 Bye Keep up the great writing 👍