Rurudo Fixes Marine's Art - [Hololive] 

It’s the subtle things like this that really elevate a drawing to the next level.

I do like Marines glistening/wet effects on the chest and stomach, and I like the blushing face and hair glistening. But perhaps that was touched up more later?

Being Towa's mom (and also seeing her other arts), Rurudo is certainly an expert in elevating those -small- precious chests.

The arm, back, and shoulders really shows the difference. It feels more 3D

I've always hated doing shadows in drawings. People that can do it correctly are amazing. Also Ina art looking amazing as usual.

Rurudo-mama is always a treat.

I actually prefer Sencho's Version cause it makes Ina look cuter, but the after Imagine is waay more technical and accurate shadowing.

Thanks for the TL! really appreciate understanding some kami advice

Both Sencho and ruru chan is such a good artist. But i just wonder how ina herself will comment/adjust the illustration

This stream looks very interesting ! If you happen to translate other parts of this stream I will be very greatful

I sometimes forget with how much they fool around, that this are freaking talented girls. Those drawings are really nice.

We takodachis were blessed with such great arts of our priestess. Bless Sencho and Rurudo for that 🙏

Beautiful 😍

I have no idea what's going on in the video because I CANNOT LOOK AWAY from Ina's PERFECT FORM

the after version, in terms of shading sense is much better than senchou's before version. i just think once senchou puts her touch into the shading details for the after version, that's when the real magic happens!!! >v

wow i tho it wouldnt be much of a change but when they're side by side it clear af which one looks better

Marine at 4:51 " Her body looks filled" Me looking somewhere thats not her chest: "..."

I notice the lighting and the blush,is there any other big edits? Exceptthe cartoon sun and the tube

To me it looks more like the sun positioning changed than anything

RTX ON

この切り抜きのAfterはまだ途中経過です 最終結果と比較してみてください

1:54 that "sou desu nee" is suspicious. I heard it somewhere before 🤔🤔

Why don't you show the actual finished comparison? Can be found at the end of the stream.

Thanks you for the clip. can you do more translation on this video, like part 2, 3, 4...

something to take note for the next time i draw. i've learned something today

Towa watching: MAMA RUN!!!!!

In case you're wondering the finished version does have improved reflections and subtle highlights from water (in 3D we call it global illumination lmao)

She's like a little loli mom/grandmother teaching our mom how to draw

i cant stop watching this video idk why

Omg rurudo

there is so much dept hto it. i wonder how ina reacted to this

that sun is 10/10 masterpiece of an art.

Marine is such a godly artist and her Laugh gives me life!!

SO GOOD :sparkle:

as an artist i can tell you, while rurudo senseis one looks more realistic, realistic doesnt equal better, kanchous stands out more

Honestly, this is the only "art fixes" that I accept. Just some slight touches and subtle changes in the lighting. Not those Twitter art "fixes" where they practically slide the skin color darker. Also those who make the character "realistic" by making them gain more weight.

Thanks for the translation. But I have to admit, I didn't read all of it. As my eyes were busy following the cursor.

Ah now I get it why Towa is an angel !!!

interesting

I like how the after looked more pettan🤣

👀.

2:12 This is "bothers" as in which part is bothering her, or seemed incorrect. Both bothers and interested are 気になる but context wise it's bothers.

Like a pro

Rurudo is making me think of Taiga Aisaka

Believe it even though marine says she understand she will make the same mistake at her next drawing, its because its her habits she drawing like that for years even after someone teach her how to do it in right way she wont and will make a same mistake some time its happen to me recently

She gave me Towa vibes OwO

Hmmmmmm...

I'm really glad Senchou collabo'd with Rurudo. Rurudo has long since been a friend and I certainly hope they'd hard-yuri'd many times.

Y'all are high. Without the glisten the coloring looks flat. The right shoulder was a good touch-up though. Edit: For those who haven't read other comments, this isnt the finished change. The actual finished one looks really good. Especially love the sun glasses.

The "after" is more like a no edits vibe like if you remove flairs etc.. the "Before "though give more emphasis around the belly button then up to the face which i like more..

La verdad me gusta la version de Marine xd

Im not an artist but both are good

ahh more..

1:04 wait she literally says nama and raw, why is she doing this

tell me what does all this cost or i will just go to pencil and paper :')

Looks better before

you could say improve rather than fixes but ok

I prefer Sencho's version XD

that’s right I do not know marine can draw pls don’t kill me

. . . The first one is actually better. Because something that's completely being forgotten about in the second image is reflected light. The first image still has reflected light in it. A water's surface would reflect light back on the subject. The second one completely removes indication of a bright reflected light. (ie. If you go in a pool during the day, the light of the pool will still reflect up onto your body at certain angles. Bounced lighting is a thing.) On top of that, it also looks like the rim light was removed from the arm as well, and really, removing the smaller light details just made the illustration look worse. Having a rim light is important for good lighting and no light will light a subject with any kind of curve or dimension to it that flatly (ie. a plane vs a cylinder). Also Marine did a good job with the small shine areas. They aren't as light as where the main light is, but it gives more dimension to the curvature. The shininess might seem like much, but you can also excuse the effect as sunscreen. No one's skin is that matte though, especially when you're in water. Shadow placement in the second one when it comes to the arm and shoulder are more accurate, but the matte look is so completely off it looks worse.

Honestly prefer the Senchou's before version much better.

😕 p̴r̴o̴m̴o̴s̴m̴

Ngl I liked the before to the after…

Shading is now more realistic but I don't think the image looks better.

personally, i like the before better than the after one, I just think the after one is a bit flat, especially in the chest/torso area but they are both amazing pieces of art !!

>loses terminator line on the right leg >loses all terminator lines and subtle shadows. >loses hue difference in the shadow how is this an improvement? Don't let a child improve your work, Marine.

To be honest it gotten bad a bit but. If Marines fine with it, so we do.

she dulled it if anything.

the original were better to be honest, rurudo only fixed 2 mistakes from sencho's art, not very important ones, but she added at least one mistake by ignoring the hair so at the end she only fixed one issue, plus her style is quite flat and tenuous, almost cadaverous, senchou's style is bright and colorfull, full of life, rurudo is not a very professional artist after all, so thats expected, unfortunately most of the high-profile artists still dont collaborate with vtubers, so i dont think we are going to see anything very professional on this world, at least not yet.

Yeah Marine's is just a LOT better... Even trying to understand what the other is going for I just can't see any improvement

The before looked better though.

before looks better

She actually made it worse, it looks lifeless