Saare Lamhon - Aayushi Rajput [an original song] 

Was struggling with some things and somehow got this...song It was nice, just words thode aur clear ho baki perfect lines... As a poet it is good🙃❤️ Cute face + cute voice + good lyrics u will do much much more than this

Hey! Im sorry i dont wanna nit-pick here. Trust me i mean well. Just a constructive criticism. The melody is really good. And the lyrics are pretty good as well. If you dont mind, I'd love to help you out in any way I can. By any chance can I get in touch with you?

Try to record audio with a separate phone or mic. You're barely audible.