For those of you reading this: Clones used to have different voices and accents in Star Wars Legends. This is seen in Republic Commando, Battlefront II, and somewhat in the Clone Wars Microseries.
I love that he put the 104th desert armor in it, not a lot of people know it. So thanks so much for putting it in. His name and character fits the armor beautifully.
Thanks mate, as the voice of that trooper I appreciate the comment! Could have definitely done a better job though, something that we aim to fix for next episode.
I wanna thank everyone for their support, I never would've thought I'd get this many views! I have a special surprise for the end of October, and expect another trailer in November. For the Republic...
wow, the bad guys have ships from the old SITH EMPIRE? Those was light cruisers compared to their capital ships, i hope to see Harrower Class Battleships now.
Really good. Enjoyed it. Look forward to next chapter. Good character development among the clones so they're personalities show a bit. The 2 shuttles being used---the clones & Jedi look like they're in a BT-7 Thunderclap and the ship that met the Sith cruiser looked like a X70-B Phantom, both from SWTOR.
That was one of my mistakes when I ended up rushing the video, Logan will have an voice improvement next episode, but I appreciate the feedback, thank you
Very cool! The animation is great, I think that it should've been one voice actor for all the clones but otherwise great. The music is great and the writing is pretty good. The "No such thing as luck captain" line is kinda stupid but that's it.
Especially since he had Shape Shifter, arguably the best baker voice on the cast, ps the line is a reference to the first episode in the geonosis arc in clone wars, ki adi mundi said it to his clone commander
It's a good video. I'm just a big Star Wars fan, so I tend to be a little picky about clones. I like the video, just would like the clones to hit closer to home.
@@RC-1840 Understand completely. As FieryNinja said this is more or less based on an old group we were in some years ago, so voices are different for story reasons and because it's the original group voicing our own characters. However we can definitely improve our voice acting and it is something we aim to get right for Episode 2.
Whoever you got to do the clone Captain's voice is fricking epic at their tamora morrison impression. But also my main criticisms of this film would be that it's a little fast at times, and the other's voice acting. When you're in the middle of a warzone you can't sound like you're just reading a script. It kinda ruins immersion a bit. Other than that I'm interested in the story aspects, though i think it took too long to get to them. So I'd say overall: film isn't bad. Needs work but not bad. 👍
Couldn't agree more, I will admit that I myself could have certainly put a lot more emotion into my characters voice. It's something we're aiming to improve for the next episode.
In regards to us all sounding different, the main reason is due to this series representing stories from an old group of ours, most of the VAs here being members of said group, hence all of us sounding different. I do understand people taking issue with the differences in voices however and it is something we will definitely aim to improve upon for the next time!
Amazing directing, really good shots, good story and pacing. It's a shame that this isn't getting more visits. The voice acting it's a bit off but youl'll get there over time with experience. 10/10 feels like a good Clone Wars episode with only clones which I think is the absolute besttt.
Thanks! The Clones do sound different for story reasons, but I do realize that it can be much better and they will be improved, appreciate the feedback as always
Wow this was pretty good dude! Gotta say though some of the voice lines just dont match the scenes to well, but I can't be too hard on ya because this is a fan film and those are never super high on the budget. Lol Other than that this was actually on par with 7 cube's recent episodes of the forgotten ones. I like the cliff hanger at the end too, it's well set up with the weird spooky sith guys at the start. Edit: Totslly forgot I actually already wrote a review, lol.
rather impressive, though i do have some positive criticism, where i believe theres room for improvement (and no, i couldnt do better, before anyone asks) the combat related animations for the characters looked and felt slow and a bit unnatural/awkward. noncombat animation was great gunship and vehicle motion on the planet seemed a bit stiff and slow ---------------- positives voice acting was well done, especially some of the helmet filters for the non clones, like the temple guard. sound design was solid enough that i'd consider it to be on par with TCW (tis my opinion) the plot itself has me interested enough to subscribe for more. 7.5/10 overall. nicely done
I appreciate your input, I will admit I did kind of rush some parts and this is my first big project, I'm glad you enjoyed it, I'm always willing to improve however I can
i look forward to the next episode even more then! :) dont rush yourself if you dont have to, always take the creative liberty you have to make sure its paced well enough. but dont overwork yourself either, take good care of yourself too
Сделано очень круто. Как называется броня, которую носит солдат с z-6? Эта броня была ещё мультсериале Войны Клонов, когда Пло Кун отправился на планету, где нашёл шатл Сайфо Диаса
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