I doubt if the tune of this famous song catches the fancy of your listeners, the length of one line of the song is too long to get adjusted in your experimental tune with the result most of the words are not understandable in one go. Moreover, this tune reminds the listeners one of the popular songs of yesteryears "Dohae aki myonui maqbarae sajawakh paaneiy pachhtawakh". Anyway, it is not so bad, just so so. My views can vary with others, this it what I have felt. Allah bless all of you.
