By far the best lyrics I’ve seen! Marvin calling him Brookie, DETG infuriated and upset of what he has to do, and Jeffy begging to have them let go- it’s all a perfect example of what Shucks is, a plea and cry for help.
Not to mention, the singing is beautiful and fucking perfect! I love the notes you hit as Jeffy, it’s so amazing! You’re one of the best lyricist I’ve seen in my 3 years of being in the lyric fandom!
I don't care what anybody says about 0:12 .the lyrics are better than the original and for some reason my favorite part " down my lane, judas, tell me why is it me? " i don't know why but its fire
@Tallen-l6u well we don't really know the orignal ending Jeffy does die tho in this verison...Im gusseing tho either they all die and Marvin only survives with brookly guy arriving alittle late only saving him
I love how Jeffy just pops in at the end. however i would've expected him to act like how he usually is, asking if they were "up in the clouds" for the funnies. Then again, Jeffy probably would take this more seriously judging how they are about to die
personally instead of "DOWN MY LANE. JUDAS, TELL ME WHY IS IT ME. HELP ME!" I would follow the shucks format by doing "DOWN MY LANE. YOU'RE TO BLAME, OH IT'S SUCH A SHAME. AW SHUCKS!" I feel like that might work better.
Yo this isnt grimm...this is " Does Fire Bars Guy " 🗣🔥 I absolutely love Marvin saying Brookie since both do show some love for eachother and they are best friends...and Jeffy randomly singing was pefect since he was knocked out and woudlve woken up by the lyrics part since the song is 6 - 5 minutes
I like this a lot, my only gripe is that either the instrumental is a bit loud or the vocals are just a bit muted out especially Marvin's voice. But still 🔥
Wow good lyrics and that was a surprisingly good Jeffy impression, literally the only problem with this the weird voice crack dbtg has at the beginning, other than that this is really good keep up the good work!
this is so cool dude! i like it so much that i made a version of your lyrical segment: "THE CARDS! I HAD PLAYED! THE WARNINGS DIDN'T WORK FOR YOU'VE GONE TOO FAR... WITH YOUR BLAME.. AND YOUR PLEAS.. MAKE A SYMPHONY BUT JUDAS PLEASE TELL ME.. WHY ME?" i can't wait for the full version(i sound like a bot sorry)
My shucks lyrics because uhh bored "MY FACE. YOUR MIND. I'LL REMAIN IN THERE UNTIL THE END OF YOUR DAYS ITS HIS FAULT (pointing at jeffy) HE OPEND THE DOOR NOW I HAVE TO KILL YOU-OH WHAT A SORE! AWWW SUCKS" (omg he said the thing)
i dont usually tune but if i do just use newtone. And for basic singing i would recommend soundgoodizer, a small bit of OTT and maybe some reverb. Not too much tho.
Slightly modified lyrics lmao: "These masks, I gave. Tell me, Why is it always the must you blame. With your name, And your face. Down my lane, Judas, tell me Why is it me? AW, SHUCKS!"
THESE MASKS THAT I GAVE TELL ME WHY IS IT ALWAYS A MUST YOU BLAME WITH YOUR NAME AND YOUR FACE DOWN MY LANE JUDAS TELL ME WHY IS IT ME HELP ME I love marvin and jeffys lyrics good job bro😄👍🏻0:11
This version of the lyrics idk because I've never been a fan of FNF lyrics but it's good but I feel calling it avarage will make me seem like am being destructive, anyway it's fine in my opinion
My version once again -_- -Brooklyn JUST LET ME GO I WONT TELL A SOUL- ARE YOU REALLY MY PAL OR YOU JUST PLAYING WITH ME *-THESE MASK THAT I PLAYED TELL ME-* *-WHY IS IT ALWAYS MY NAME TO BLAME-* *-WITH YOUR NAME AND YOUR FACE JUST-* *-TELL ME JESUS MARVIN WHY WAS IT-* *-YOU-* *-NOW ME-* IM DOING EDIT TO FIX THE IMPERSONATE DONE
the these masks i gave, was a mistype. It was gain. he means the suits he wears to impersonate his brother. why is it always the must you blame means, marvin blames dbtg, despite the fact dbtg warned him. with your name, and your face is just a reference down my lane, judas tell me why is it me, means that he was betrayed, like judas betrayed jesus, judas being marvin.
@@Grimm-Grimm yes isn't that the truth, the youtube algorithm demands it and it shall be done, just tired of so many remakes, hopefully the animation will finally be done but ill give you props you put time into this, respectfully saying.
@@gabrielsekula6068 im waiting for this shit to be done too lowkey the demand in this was high since my last shucks, im not even that big of a fan, of aethos. i prefer sonic.exe things. Alot more. I am alot better at them too. But this is what works for the people so sadly I have to,
@@Grimm-Grimm deadass im surprised rotten smoothie didn't really get more love, it seems like this shit is appearing more remixes across youtube then most fnf mods, but I don't blame the fan base, as much as SFM has declined over the years, it seems like fnf is really just surviving on a handful of mods at a time, with twiddle finger, aethos lore and yourself being the top 3 right now
