You have a great voice, and the video and whole arrangement are awesome too. I'd like to hear you do it again with more emotion. Center what ever it is that hurts and let it out. You sound like you're holding yourself back. Let that beautiful voice loose!
Suenas como una copia de Avril Lavigne haciendo un cover de Slipknot. Igual no es tan malo el cover. Pero busca tu propio estilo. No copies. Cantas muy bonito para ser una copia de alguien.