You should give viewers a good look of the finished piece, as well as a link for them to see your portfolio/gallery or even download this one. Also, great job on this drawing!
I love how you make them look like real ponies it's incredible I'm still working on drawing My Little pony I haven't done it in 3 years so I'm a little bit Rusty
A few things, art work looks incomplete and we do not get to see the finished piece (or get a very good look at it) as the video abruptly cuts off and the shading is a bit soft. Otherwise I personally like the artwork but I really wish we could've seen the end product