This speech i think is unnecessary when we have a book of Allah "The Holy Quran" don't care about what different sects have been saying follow the book of light
I appreciate the talent but there are still some technical flaws in the speech that need to be addressed by teachers that will make the speech more beautiful. By the way, good work Shahzaib👍
@@UntilIWinIt 1- Pitch of ur sound was nearly same all the time, it should have matched the context of the sentences spoken. 2- "Halat aa yar" is an infromal sentence, whereas, formal sentences should have been used instead. 3- Its better not to tell stories in speech (may be sometimes in debates). Story of a villager was quite unsuitable in such gathering. 4- Hand gestures were not matching your words in few sentences. 5- Correct words were not used at some places. As "Hikra tha chawan" for the first category, and again "Hikra tha chawan" for second category. It has repeatedly been used in ur speech. For second category, you should have said "Biya tha chawan", likewise. 5- Stable body movement is preferred while making speeches. 6- Pronunciation of few words. Above all, there is alot of talent hidden in you, you can emerge a finest speaker if you wish to. Hopefully, you will take it positive and will perform much better in next speech. My good wishes for you brother. All the best!
Sorry to say but this boy quoted one thing wrong when he said there is no explanation or not anything mentioned in Quran and hadith that Islam is a complete system" but i must it is mentioned i can show you many references, i hope you will not consider me a sectarian if you will then i am telling you i am totally against the sectarianism but i know why you spread this kind of idea because you all are "all means majority" inspired by the people like John Locke let me say you are inspired by liberalism, and i want to say education is most powerful weapon when it is not going to against the rules and regulations implemented by Allah to mankind
