Tip: it’s a bit slow maybe speed up the animation, and add some of that fast moving cartoony blur (smear frame) (And if it isn’t I time with the music anymore you can add filler) Also thanks for the likes its my most liked comment 🙏
All he has to do is fix up the kick more by making it more natural like maybe it can be a different avatar kicking the logo into the head with a smear frame until it’s gone then just make the jump spin into the normal logo more smooth and natural and it would look better (btw I think one of the main reasons it looks weird because he’s just reshaping things instead of redrawing it in a natural way)
@@micha65432 I'm 15 and I play Roblox , am I magically a child now? we have decent games like Hellmet , Riotfall , Rolling thunder and Rise of nations . don't be all cocky if you only saw frontpage games
Yeah that isn't poke 😭 If I'm correct that's the avatar Roblox constantly used in advertising images Just because it has the same hair and face as pokes avatar means nothing
Some tips: Maybe you can try learning some of the 12 animation principles, with ease in and ease out it would already look a lot better You already got anticipation and a bit of squash and stretch, but the movement looks a bit robotic Also you could try to use more of the space you didn't use in the canvas, so it doesn't look empty Doing small animations like the bouncing ball or the moving dot could really help you practice animation principles, you could practice those before moving to more complex animations You have really cool ideas and there is always room for improvement, great job
@@Diduardn00b no one is better than the other, he is trying he's best, as u can see in each short (not all but most of hes uploads) he asks if he did a mistake or not cuz he knows he's learning, that's good that u know how to animate stuff, but that doesnt mean u can just hes animation "trash"
@@alaenaji2840 people are convincing him to add easing and smear frames for a long time but he hearts the comments and then ignores them. and doesnt do the smear frames and easings. its pretty clear that he just wants attention in the comments
@@MidoriyaIzuku-tp4np Why do you have to know how to animate just to judge an animation?? That's like saying you can't judge someone's food if you aren't a food critic.
That looks better than some of the real Roblox animations! My only recommendation is that instead of a kick, you can just make it spin kinda like a saw.
