since it doesnt have that deep of a background story I thought maybe I could interpret a bit through my imagination in this comment, good luck if you found my comment and author nim if you like could you pin this comment so that others can see :) Snuggling your face on the soft pillow, you let out a groan as you felt the urge to throw up, you quickly got up, it was 7 in the morning and your day was followed by the same routine which you have been following for the past few days, ever since you got married your life hasn’t been the same, it was thrilling at first, you both shared memorable and sweet moments together but for the past few weeks his work has been piling up as well as yours, and he uses you to relieve his stress, making you over work, taking advantage of you and not giving you the affection you need, although you are an understanding wife, and tried to give him time, but it is getting on your nerves, you are getting sick of his behavior, not that you want to divorce him, it’s just that you have gotten very moody lately and he has been giving zero attention to you whatsoever. Thoroughly washing your face, you abruptly stared at your pale face on the mirror, it has been a while you stopped caring about yourself, you would mostly over work and not give yourself a chance of rest, your sleep hours reduced and your life became miserable. You grew up believing in soulmates, prince’s and a magical love story, but this is all bullshit you thought, there is no such thing as true love, your heart started losing its color, but you knew for sure, that your heart still had its lively content and wasn’t going to give up sooner or later. As long as this fake smile was preventing you to expose your misery, everything was okay, but still fake happiness is the worst sadness, words echo as the past shimmers in your mind, a cute little girl with a smile spread on her face, as she runs across the fields with butterflies surrounding her, giggles, laughter, smiling, joy, pleasure, rapture, delight. Where is it gone, did I replace it… with sorrow, depression, anxiety, dejection, regret, despondent, “who are you Y/n, is it really the same you” that’s when you had it, you broke down in front of the sink, tears stream down your face, words stuck in your head, feelings were locked in your heart, your real face demolished with pain and suffering, if men were so cruel they would shoot us before we came to such misery, Tae: Y/n!, what are you doing in there?! Get ready. Your heart trembled as the door was vigorously shook by your husband who doesn’t seem to be in a good mood, Y/n: coming! Wait a min (you tried to sound as natural as you could, you quickly changed into your work garment and applied a light layer of makeup to prevent anyone from seeing your dark circles and red eyes, from crying and lack of sleep, you sigh as you decided to skip your breakfast since you have no time, you realized you will have to walk for 15 minutes to the company since Taehyung took the car *sigh* it was snowing so you grabbed your coat and left, You had walked for 5 minutes already, but your energy was giving up, you continued to walk until you reached at your destination, as you entered you saw Sana running towards you with a worried expression “y/n! boss is calling you, he seems mad” you gulped hard before nodding and making your way to Taehyungs chamber, as usual you saw Sabrina, your bestfriend with him in the chamber, the fact that he made her his secretary instead of you was kinda bothering you but shrugging it off was all you could do, she was your bestie after all. before you could speak anything Tae glared at you Tae: why are you late? y/n: ahh I tried to be as early as possible but you se- Tae: whatever, I called you because I am switching your position from an employee to Janitor, for the past few weeks you haven't been able to handle it and you get distracted since the last cleaner resigned maybe you could take over instead of lying at home, , (you looked at him in disbelief) y/n: but why? I do everything you require, and Sabrina SHE rarely completes any of her tasks. Tae: at least she isn’t getting fat like you you look down knowing he is right, when it hit you could I be preg-” you thought just then a hard sting was felt on your lower abdomen as you winced in pain Sabrina : are you okay *fake concern" Y/n: I am sorry Tae, but I don’t think I can do this for today * tears rolled out your eyes as Taehyung didn’t know what he should believe, with that you ran out of the chamber and went back home hugging yourself and crying, you expected Taehyung to come after you, seeing your situation, but little did he care, your heart ached but you didn’t waste time and rushed to the rest room before opening and taking out the pregnancy test you bought few months ago but never opened it since you got your periods and knew the result beforehand, but.. you had a different feeling today, TimeSkip: Your world crashed into pieces as you saw two red lines on the test screen, one was slightly visible but the result was positive, you used to think you would have tears of joy in this moment, but instead tears of sorrow and pain escaped your eyes, you could have managed it, if it weren’t for a baby to come, you sobbed even louder, “how am I going to do this?, how am I going to take care of this child alone, he will surely kick me out” you became a crying mess as you went to your room and snuggled yourself in the blankets while caressing your tummy “don’t worry mommy will take care of you” for the first time your heart felt something you have never felt before, you felt affected by your own words,”mommy?” you whispered to your self “I am going to be a mom” you tried to smile at the thought but you never expected it to be this hard to smile, it had been past midnight and you had no doubt that he would come anytime soon, it had been a habit after all, the car parking could be heard while Yn was wearing a coat for a nice midnight walk along side the street walk, as you were opening the door you saw Taehyung with his cold aura gazing you from head to toe "where are you going" you abruptly pushed him aside before walking out "as if you care" and you ran away before he could continue , the pleasant streets started changing there form little by little and it soon turned to a dark alley, not thinking much you continued your steps taking in the fresh monsoon smell which was yet to come, your steps abruptly stopped when you saw a tall and a short figure standing along side facing there backs, in an instant both turned sensing you and you shrieked seeing two vampires, there fangs were slightly piercing their lips and their ethereal features started to come in sight, your heart drop fell and within a split second you were brought to a dark hall tied on the chair, there were 6 people there, the two from earlier and then 4 more, "who are you" you said with wide eyes as the seemingly oldest stepped forward "Im Jinnie, you can call me Jin, but who cares when you are going to die anyway" your heart stopped until you heard muffled voices of a girl until you came in sight of Sabrina who was tied to the chair "hey, I am Jimin lil girl, you dared to step in our property now you will watch your own best friend getting killed infront of you" as much as you had a toxic friendship, you couldnt bare the sight of death ad so you screamed "I have nothing to do with her" you said gritting your teeth "oh, I guess we brought the wrong person" jungkook stated and in a flash of two fingers colliding you saw Taehyung standing there with a frown on his face, "where am I" he stuttered and Namjoon stated "choose one, yn or Sabrina" ~the writers story~ you went to Hobi and hugged him, you both were became bestfriends throughout time since he was the only human, you also gained love from the vampires and accepted them as your friends too, you were all strong in bond and were inseperable, the other 5 vampires came running to you sensing worry "yn you safe" yoongi stated out of breathe while Jungkook lifted Rossy in his arms to protect her since Taehyung was coming your way with slow steps, Jimin stood infront of you blocking Tae "what do you want, you scumbaag" Taehyung gulped "I want to talk to Yn" they all scoffed "in our presence that is" Namjoon said and Taehyung gulped "look Yn, I am really sorry, it was not meant to be that way," y/n: SHUT UP IDIOT, I HAVE ERASED YOU FROM MY LIFE FOREVE AND AM NOT PLEASED TO SEE THIS FACE AGAIN, where is your subrina huh?" TAe: She cheated on me, or should I say went back to her ex whom she was cheating on before" you rolled your eyes and glanced at Jungkook who had Rossy in his arms and he was swinging her up and down to distract her from that conversation "Jungkook take Rossy to the swings, be alert and keep your eyes on her" Jungkook nod before walking off to the swings while babying Rossy with babyish tone in his voice "is that my child" Taehyung said and you glared at him "yes, through blood, but not through love, I will never consider you as her dad" Tae" Yn please you cant do this to me" Y/n chuckled darkly "I just did" Tae"you cant make a child believe someone else as her father" you scoffed "she knows Hobi isnt her real father, but she knows for a fact that her real father is indeed a scummbag and you wouldnt want her to know you are her father she might end up crying" you turned around side hugging hobi while the other members followed toward where Rossy was, and there was a heartbroken guilty Taehyung ~the end hope you liked it
me: crying because taehyung choose my bestfriend also me when yoongi and jimin choose hobi to be the father of meh child: AHHH OK HELP ME I AM GONNA DIE- WAIT NO THIS IS MY DREAM LIKE- HELP AHHHHHHHH😁😍😍😍😍😘😘😘💜💜💜💛💛💛
I didn't understand why they were going to kill y/n.... and why Taehyung have to choose between y/n and her bestfriend.... how can be Taehyung father of both the kids
@@unknown-qf3wf but still i didn't understand that the starting.... i mean that.... where were they n why Taehyung have to choose between them.... n the ppl who were going to kill her , comforted her after Tae choosed y/n's friend
I'm sorry to hear that and I am in a depression too because of modules and editing one shots And all the bashers But you know what made me get out through that depression I did what I like I did what I want I listened to songs that make me calm.... And I didn't mind all of the bashers now I hope you will get through that depression 😊
@@xxpinky_chipxx5595 even i get quite depressed but i think its because of your writing, you write it that good that it left the effect and song goes with story... keep writing!!
you have talent in writing story but i will give you some advice as a watcher.. the text is so fast and the story is kinda weird it should be given more plot and yeah its so short ..also it would be good to watch with a pic of them it would look more realistic
Can you make a jimin ff like this author Nim 💜💜💜... when he save y/n because she is pregnant she's carrying his baby and choose her over own his girlfriend
She have self respect that after all this Hobi didn't even think twice to be the father her child even though he isn't the father that child and yeah I live this story very much
Yah you know my best friend's name is Sabrina and she has the character like the story but I can't end the friendship because we have been friends since our 1at day at school and it's a friend squad where we all are bestest friends in the group even our moms
Ummmm I don't think it's necessary to say but y/n's friend's name and my name is kind of similar cuz her friend's name is SABRINA and my name is SABIHA😬😬😬😬😬😬😬
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