Looks good to me ! Just remember when building do it to relax and when you find yourself treating it as a job just walk away. I've made the mistake many times in 60 years and it is easy to lose the joy in modeling in any number of ways. Cheers.
Can you make a video on canopy masking? I’m no where near your skill and you can see my planes on my channel but I just paint metal rivets on the clear plastic with a paintbrush.
So I first colored ti in vellejo bronze then did 2 waves of yellow then another coat of bronze and that's what it ended up looking like! Hope it works for you model on!