I love this commentary; wish we had that on more TASes like this. A few things are odd: Most of the time, you wait to explain why you’re doing something until it happens (like with the item glitch), so why did you explain that you were going to use healing herbs against Zoma when you bought them, despite there being plenty of time during the battle to explain what you were doing (and mention why healing damages the boss in the first place)? When you were messing around with the item glitch, it might be nice to give more details about what you’re looking for and mention some of the items that pop up while you’re doing it (like the Rainbow Drop). And finally, that last part is kind of an odd explanation of how you’d optimize the battle by figuring out how to defeat it in the fewest turns.
The commentary was very pleasant. Though I do kind of wonder why there was 8 minutes of leveling up, even after being able to glitch all your stuff... There wasn't a way to subtract 2 from anything else that was useful?