"Tell Me Where I'm Going Wrong" is a comedic short film following a socially out-of-sync - and spatially unaware - man named Mark, as he struggles to understand the concept of playing frisbee.
I loved this, the angles were quite good. However, the starting and middle parts I found were more dramatic/intense than comedic. Such as with the scenes of Mark's thoughts, I get what the music was trying to do, but it felt more dramatic than actual comedy. Though I did find the ending quite good - gave me a chuckle. Awesome work. Keep it up!
Okay I'm glad I gave this a chance! Definitely different and I legit guffawed several times! Well worth the watch! The "twist" (if we can call it that, unless its a twist of the wrist...) at the end is well worth waiting for!
