Good try at a young age!! Would just give a feedback that this song is bass heavy so bass needs to be precise or the whole song would sound messy. On top of that, basics of being a bassist is to follow the drummers bass pedal rhythm. I suggest the drummer to follow at least bass pedal rhythm played by Badjao, theres no need to follow his "fill ins" as it is quite advance but at least the bass pedal. He posted it in his youtube channel playing this song, check it out. Theres also timing from the drummer, practice with metronome on with the song. Google the songs BPM. You will feel weird at first but it will help you in a long run. If drummer is off, it'll mess up everyone. Drummer is the time keeper of the band. Bassist and Drummer compliment each other, its the foundation of the band. Then theres tuning your instrument for EVERY session. It is a must. The solo/break seems very off by the bassist, im guessing out of tune. Learn to play as a group not individual, listen to each other. You might be perfect playing alone but sound different as a group.
Great Cover, ayos na sana yung Bass Solo kaso parang bumaba sia ng Pitch/Fret kaya d na sila match ng Guitarist XD Pero Bravo Guys! Keep it up! More covers pa! :)
