Give them some credit for using their allowance to put this together.At least they spent their money on something useful. It's a low budget movie anyway.
Can not knock the yoot dem for trying a thing with film - could see what they were trying to achieve - great cinematography - well done - be good to see more.
the acting is very weak, the acting is supposed to show not tell by words.. he's saying what he's doing constantly instead of showin, which doesn't give the audience anything to work out and gets boring. "Why ain't she picking up" .. "Let me ring her" seriously in your terms the acting is HELLA DEAD CUZ.
First comment, blap blap blap! (if somebody comments b4, I dont like you) I quite enjoyed the story, despite the obviously amateur acting, which we'll see as a good thing. Saying that, the antagonist was pretty decent in my books, and I can see the protagonist was used because of his dancing skills, which helps us to forgive some of his less credible acting scenes. The cinematography wasn't bad either, considering the clearly low budget. To improve, you guys should consider stabilised shots throughout (even the shaky ones - just looks more pro!). The main character was very relatable to the London audience, with his contrasting sides allowing most of us to identify with him in some way. I personally didn't expect the cliff hanger, so well done there too. Relax. Judge yourselves against YOUR aims. Take in the constructive feedback. Move on to the next production. Peace & Love. #Exkluse
Hey thanks so much for the feedback. i will deffo take what you said into concideration to make the next project even better especially with the shakey cam. once again Thanks.
FabuliciousMedia Wasnt expecting this to be good tbh but i watched all of it and it was decent. good story line good message. However i do think the main character (the dancer) hes acting was abit cringy while he was trying to act 'bad' when he was with hes girlfriend it was fine but when it came to the 'fam, blood' talk it was just cringy to watch. Give this 3 out of 5. Look forward to more projects
the fact I watched it all, says something for the basic storyline. Things to improve are definitely some of the acting, stressing the word fuckin every time you say it sounds stupid. On a phone call but you can see the phones on facebook. she got shot at Heathrow, possibly the worst place to shoot someone.
26:27 The pretty boy supposedly receives letter directed to him. I take it that these thugs, have poor grammar to be writing "your dead" instead of "you're dead". Was this deliberate?
just my opinnion but i think in the end we should have found out that the girl was with the main guys best friend ( got close during there little break up) and she stole the tickets and went with him.. just putting it out there but yh this was actually really good for an ameture film *Slow Claps well done!
If I was kayden I wouldn't apologise or try to get back with Rachel after I win the competition she wasn't their for you when you needed her, now that she sees you have p she's gonna come running back like mad, don't let a hi take advantage of ym ppl, she doubted yu
I find referring to a lesser man as a 'pussyhole' to be really derogatory towards women (linking them to being the weaker sex) the word got overkilled like Tarantino with the N word. Script defs needs work, acting too but overall a decent narrative and some pretty realistic themes.
How u gonna loose mans work win a contest and not even send thr man back his ps and think u could jus run off to the u.s run the gwap first kno dat waz the whole reason ya homie wanted ya head ,
he was still broke and about try win and i bet he would have gave the guy his bread back plus it's crazy jerome killed kaden girl when she took care of him when he was broke and had no where to go she let him sleep over and fed him it makes u think do u really know if u can trust people like that in the same lifestyle as jerome and the way jerome said to kaden that i see your trying better your life so i don't balme u than killed kaden girl
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