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THE BEST PERSONAL STATEMENT I'VE EVER READ (Cambridge University Example) 

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This is the BEST personal statement I’ve analysed so far as part of the Personal Statement Masterclass I’m developing over at Skillshare. One course will be a Medicine Masterclass and the other an Oxbridge Masterclass covering a broad range of subjects from law and psychology to maths and engineering. #example #personalstatement #medicine
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What's different about this course?
I'm not going to tell you what I think is going to work. I'm going to show you what does work.
What to expect?
For a lot of us, the personal statement is often the most important thing that we'll ever write. It's the thing that'll determine the next 4-6 years of our lives. So it's easy to see the importance of making sure it's the best it can be. And that's exactly what I'm going to be helping you with.
In the first few lessons, we're first going to be looking at the expertly designed 8 pillar framework based on personal statements of students who were accepted into Oxbridge and other top ranking universities. These 8 pillars will form the basis of you thought process and help you decide what to include in the personal statement.
We're going to spend some time learning how best to reflect on experiences in ways that show the reader that you are someone who is capable of extracting lessons and developing for the better as a result of it.
We're going to learn about strategies like the personality pillar and writing style to help your personal statement stand out and shine.
Importantly, we're going to be linking all this theory to carefully analysed real life examples from past successful personal statements.
Then once we've decided what to include, we're going to go through the structure.
We're going to be providing you with proven syntax and paragraph formulas that will ensure that every sentence you write has a purpose.
We'll also be learning how we structure the overall personal statement so that it flows beautifully and tells a story.
We'll also learn new strategies for cutting down your personal statement to fit the character count and how you can maximise what you say in the fewest words possible.
One of the biggest strengths of this video course, is that we provide 5 example personal statements each carefully broken down and analysed. And as each has come from students, now doctors, who have been accepted into Oxbridge and other top ranking unis, you can be confident that everything you learn has been tried, tested and shown to work every time.
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@iTzMaJorTaK
@iTzMaJorTaK 3 года назад
It’s not about how much work experience you do, it’s about how you demonstrate the skills and insight gained from the work experience that you did do. From a final year medic who got in with basically no hospital work experience.
@ameerahussein9324
@ameerahussein9324 3 года назад
Thank you for this! Due to rona there’s no way I’m getting hospital work experience
@abdulqadirmaricar258
@abdulqadirmaricar258 3 года назад
Hey, if you don’t mind could I read your ps. I’m in year 12 and in dire need of some inspiration. Thanks :)
@l.n.9462
@l.n.9462 Год назад
Hey, I'm glad it worked out for you. I completely understand the position you were in because I'm in that position right now. I realized I wanted to do nursing late so I didn't have years of preparation or experience. & I only have a few months to apply. (I'm in the UK so you don't do Geneds but usually, people take a year of nursing-related subjects before going to uni.) I was wondering what you expanded on in your essay? Thanks, Best.
@anneharrison1849
@anneharrison1849 Год назад
Absolutely, even compared to when this personal statement with written, Cambridge has decreased the importance of work experience. It's generally still necessary to demonstrate some caring experience, but they are trying to decrease the value of "I shadowed a surgeon for two weeks (because Daddy is a doctor and arranged it for me)". Despite this, they still seem to demonstrate some cluelessness, my daughter has been told the best way to practice for interview is to practice talking to someone working in the field and she's quite disappointed I don't know anyone working in linguistics!
@tdreamgmail
@tdreamgmail 3 года назад
And what do you write if you're not the perfect human being.
@user-gl4mh5js6d
@user-gl4mh5js6d Год назад
😂😂😂😂
@rimshazulfiqar6067
@rimshazulfiqar6067 11 месяцев назад
That's the most valid question anyone can ever ask.
@meera8577
@meera8577 7 месяцев назад
but at last we r human being and machine of cooking up stories. So do that lie lie and just lie.
@chisomudeze7706
@chisomudeze7706 5 месяцев назад
​@@meera8577most of them obviously do
@ramieofori-adarkwah3118
@ramieofori-adarkwah3118 4 месяца назад
Honestly 😂😂😂😂😂
@roseannetrow1208
@roseannetrow1208 3 года назад
although this video really clearly explained a structure and why this guys statement was good, its really of no help to most of us. that's a hell of a lot of experience that most of us dont have and cant even think of a suitable option to replace. most of us have retail or fast food jobs. It would be really helpful if you made a video helping those of us who arent already at a massive advantage with excellent grades and work experience, we are the ones that really need help. No offence, i really appreciate the effort and clarity of the video, just i checked out almost instantly because right away i knew you werent talking to people like me and you cant help me with this, that guy was always going to get into uni, the statement was bonus for him. There's a lot of us out there hoping our statement banks our place. is it worth me making a skillshare account or will the template be much like this video and only really help those who are already stand out?
@ShahnawazKhan-re6sj
@ShahnawazKhan-re6sj 3 года назад
Aye, I agree a lot with you on this. @Doctor Shaene , I hope you're able to us too!
@VegitoBlue
@VegitoBlue 3 года назад
Replace work experience with life experience that’s one thing I plan to do 😄
@mondstadtvlogs
@mondstadtvlogs 3 года назад
no matter what type of work experience and things outside of school you've done, always find a way to link them back to the course by highlighting the skills you've gained or developed (be it teamwork, problem-solving, etc.) and show what you've learned from those experiences
@arabboyakhmadullaev7914
@arabboyakhmadullaev7914 3 года назад
Yes, right. I dont even have that good level of English and my ps now looks like a story for kids🤦‍♂️
@hoshihonasaneha7563
@hoshihonasaneha7563 3 года назад
they specifically said this is a Cambridge University example, so I don't see why it is surprising that the applicant has lots of experience and perfect grades. Maybe you should search for personal statement examples that are more suited to what you want to achieve?
@magdalenaglinka2195
@magdalenaglinka2195 3 года назад
Honestly good luck to any of you guys applying this year. I remember doing my personal statement last year and you can't imagine how happy I am to have this part of my life behind me hahah
@joan5734
@joan5734 3 года назад
How did it go?
@magdalenaglinka2195
@magdalenaglinka2195 3 года назад
@@joan5734 It went pretty well I got accepted to my favourite uni (Edinburgh) so couldn't be happier :) How is it going for you?
@SelfImprovement1111
@SelfImprovement1111 3 года назад
You’ll have to write one when you get a job 😂
@guccitae8416
@guccitae8416 2 года назад
@@SelfImprovement1111 no you dont lol
@SelfImprovement1111
@SelfImprovement1111 2 года назад
@@guccitae8416 well certain jobs do.
@kawaiikitty4569
@kawaiikitty4569 3 года назад
The personal statement was effective because it showcased the best aspects of this individual, using a fact based method. This also avoids any aspect of appearing arrogant as it is the facts that show the passion of the individual backed up with the active steps they have taken to learn about the subject. This format also works for personal statements for job applications.
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 3 года назад
facts
@Catitalaratoncita
@Catitalaratoncita 3 года назад
I love your vocabulary skills.
@kawaiikitty4569
@kawaiikitty4569 3 года назад
Ophélie Baudelaire Thank you, that’s very kind of you!
@alishaashraf3364
@alishaashraf3364 2 года назад
Looks like he was preparing all his life for this personal statement moment. Shined.
@user-dr6gz7vg9d
@user-dr6gz7vg9d 2 месяца назад
😆
@NoahAndABadger
@NoahAndABadger 3 года назад
Me 26 years old graduates uni 5 years ago watching a video on how to write a personal statement
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 3 года назад
loool
@akdlg9sjjslk8
@akdlg9sjjslk8 3 года назад
Dude I'm exactly the same as you, glad I'm not the only one 😭
@rosie6
@rosie6 Год назад
I’m not gonna lie when I heard his intro I drooled a little. Whenever I see really good writing it makes me so happy and inspired! Thank you!
@plebjames
@plebjames Год назад
Having an amazing array of experiences is a big part of what makes this personal statement so good
@hikalight
@hikalight 3 года назад
With all do respect this is far from the best personal statement, and honestly, in rare cases, most personal statements are adequate enough, and only get labeled as outstanding when the person using them succeeds enough to become relevant for people to analyze it wishing to replicate the same success.
@martinb1488
@martinb1488 3 года назад
So well edited, simple and easy to understand. You earned a new subscriber !
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 3 года назад
Awesome, thank you!
@toothfairy5352
@toothfairy5352 3 года назад
I wish people would just read start to finish and dissect it after. It’s important to hear how it flows.
@Cz-hd3vu
@Cz-hd3vu 3 года назад
This is by far the best PS analysis I saw on RU-vid. Thx a lotttt
@Anshul_126
@Anshul_126 Год назад
I have to write a sop within 48 hours and here i was looking for it on RU-vid. The details are immaculate.
@contemporary_Latino
@contemporary_Latino Год назад
I’ve been watching videos RE personal statements for a couple of days now. I’m at the beginning of this one and it’s already clearly the best.
@munirabasher8873
@munirabasher8873 3 года назад
Whoa ur friend is a full package, but honestly he is such a great example cuz we have to learn from the best. Thanks.
@papariham4008
@papariham4008 4 месяца назад
I CAN NOT THANK YOU ENOUGH FOR YOUR OPSONIZING WAY TO COLLECT THE INCREDIBLE IDEAS MEDICAL STUDENTS
@katrinapaliukenas7232
@katrinapaliukenas7232 Год назад
i really enjoy the break-downs you provide, but it would be nice to hear a full read-through right at the end to understand the natural flow of the statements
@DanzEnglish
@DanzEnglish 2 года назад
I hope the other tutorial videos are like this. SO well made. Thanks Dr
@natalieadams3463
@natalieadams3463 2 года назад
Thank you so much! This totally helped me write my personal statement for a scholarship application.
@navinafrancis3273
@navinafrancis3273 3 года назад
You are the best I see on RU-vid so far.. Thank you..
@candacejune416
@candacejune416 3 года назад
This was great!! thank you very much for this. I will be looking into your guide
@garibanbabasaragorn2096
@garibanbabasaragorn2096 Год назад
You are doing great job man! Thanks a lot!
@garima2473
@garima2473 2 года назад
Greatly helpful! Keep up the good work📈
@nesrinedahou7919
@nesrinedahou7919 3 года назад
it just inspired me and motivated me to write mine after getting confused between the personal statement and statement of purpose, I think everything is clear now, thank you
@Jessica-zf9ok
@Jessica-zf9ok 2 года назад
can you explain a bit about the differences pls I'm still so lost😢
@kattylike5266
@kattylike5266 2 года назад
This was very insightful. I was wondering if you would recommend mentioning a levels in the personal statement alongside the other points for economics
@ajreddd
@ajreddd 3 года назад
Grateful that I found this. Thank you so much for sharing this!
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 3 года назад
Glad it was helpful!
@marinagemoftheseas
@marinagemoftheseas 3 года назад
Thank you so much, I love you, you are the reason I'll write a good personal statement!
@musoseven8218
@musoseven8218 2 месяца назад
A great video, empathically done. Your friend is a star, caring, empathic and eloquent. 👍😊💜✌️
@saachisharma9804
@saachisharma9804 4 года назад
I just found out about your channel from tiktok and your videos are so helpful and informative! Thank you :)
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 4 года назад
Yessss 🙌 Glad it’s useful!
@KyurinDiary
@KyurinDiary 2 года назад
AMAZING ONE!
@limolly254
@limolly254 Год назад
Great video! It has been quite helpful. Thanks a lot.
@xmodMAN76
@xmodMAN76 3 года назад
wait i just finished my ps for PA school and the idea in the introduction here is also what mine was about. i feel good right now
@willwithers8171
@willwithers8171 3 года назад
I think the most important thing here is doing lots of relevant work experience and volunteering!
@user-kl4uc4ml8s
@user-kl4uc4ml8s Год назад
feels good to see the name of my university right in the beginning of the statement ^_^ nice video with informative content.
@Celinassousa
@Celinassousa 3 года назад
Amazing video! I even took notes and I am not thinking about writing a personal statement any time soon. Amazing advice
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 3 года назад
Glad it was helpful!
@Visitusexamsharkscom
@Visitusexamsharkscom 3 года назад
★★★I used this website topedgewriters.com to help me write my application letter and they did a good job. I only sent them a draft and they wrote a professional letter for me.I recommend that you guys should check them out.★★★
@turkopolo
@turkopolo 3 года назад
I love your channel, some of your advice really helped
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 3 года назад
Awesome, thank you!
@941119yan
@941119yan 2 года назад
Thank you, that's a good example.
@ruthkamwi_youtube
@ruthkamwi_youtube 3 года назад
So helpful!👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾Thanks a bunch!
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 3 года назад
Glad it was helpful!
@itzelr3514
@itzelr3514 2 года назад
This is awesome! Thanks! :)
@alexandramiracle5011
@alexandramiracle5011 3 года назад
My congratulations. Thank you for the statement
@martingirgis5150
@martingirgis5150 Год назад
I recommend this video to all who do not know where to start with their personal statement. Take the idea of the structure of the essay and make it your own. Goodluck to app students and God bless
@sacdaabdurhman
@sacdaabdurhman 2 года назад
“You cannot be protected from the things that frighten you and hurt you, but if you identify with part of your being that is responsible for transformation, then you are always equal or more than equal of the things that frighten you” Keep you head up 💜
@No-ky3kb
@No-ky3kb Год назад
fantastic quote
@syedmohammadaanasfarukh890
@syedmohammadaanasfarukh890 2 года назад
Bro you have no idea how much this helped. NO WONDER YOU GOT INTO CAMBRIDGE 😭😭. Really want to thank you man. This video has single handedly done soooo much for my ps. THANK YOU BROOO.
@aliciawise3331
@aliciawise3331 3 года назад
Wow! What a useful video! Thank you (:
@zzasserzz
@zzasserzz 3 года назад
Excellent video !!
@larshoernle5400
@larshoernle5400 2 года назад
This is excellent !
@abhinayareddy6747
@abhinayareddy6747 Год назад
Thank you for the information.
@anonymous-wi1pw
@anonymous-wi1pw 2 года назад
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@lushi4206
@lushi4206 3 года назад
such good video, thank you very much
@supwintphyu1991
@supwintphyu1991 8 месяцев назад
The essay was inspiring, and your analysis is quite helpful. I am in the process of developing my personal statement and getting thought-blocks in the way until I found your channel. Thanks a lot for your clear and strategic guidance.
@starfishxxl229
@starfishxxl229 3 года назад
Thanks a million!!
@connormcdonnell8802
@connormcdonnell8802 3 года назад
Love the video and great new about the masterclass you are doing on Skillshare any idea of when it will be available. All the best :)
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 3 года назад
The planned release date is tomorrow 🙌 Thanks so much!
@connormcdonnell8802
@connormcdonnell8802 3 года назад
Doctor Shaene amazing thank you 😊
@Visitusexamsharkscom
@Visitusexamsharkscom 3 года назад
★★★I used this website topedgewriters.com to help me write my application letter and they did a good job. I only sent them a draft and they wrote a professional letter for me.I recommend that you guys should check them out.★★★
@rishirasavathanan8757
@rishirasavathanan8757 4 года назад
thanks for the very informative video
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 4 года назад
Pleasure! Glad it was useful! 🙌
@nusratali7179
@nusratali7179 Год назад
Hello! I want to thank you Shaene for your amazing free personal statement guide. I followed it and made it my own and I am happy to say I got into NEOMA Business School. Thank you so much for contributing in such a significant way to my journey.
@okolosioghenerukevwe9418
@okolosioghenerukevwe9418 Год назад
Congratulations
@lilaipad3075
@lilaipad3075 3 года назад
I wouldn't say this personal statement is "the best I've ever read" or even all that great. There's no specificity in the examples, they're rehashing their CV talking about a lot of different things superficially, there is no real theme interconnecting the examples. Obviously, they've done a lot of impressive stuff... maybe UK Personal Statements are different, but it's better to focus on a few things and talk more deeply about their meaning to you.
@shahadarzouni5601
@shahadarzouni5601 3 года назад
I agree with you point on having no theme. However, I suppose through the numerous experiences he went out of his way for, he does show a genuine passion and understanding for Medicine.
@chloelau8291
@chloelau8291 3 года назад
UK personal statements are very different from other places in the world especially the us, however, I don’t think that is the best I’ve seen too
@brightigwe3313
@brightigwe3313 3 года назад
How is this personal statement different from a statement of purpose?
@chloelau8291
@chloelau8291 3 года назад
Bright Igwe it is used deliberately for applying universities, UK universities have student fixated on a specific course (like a major) from the start so you would need to specify what made you interested in it, life goals and more of american essays are deemed rather a bad approach to UK Personal Statements
@tanushagarwal5522
@tanushagarwal5522 3 года назад
It's quite a bit different from Essays or personal statements elsewhere in the world. It's a lot less deep and a lot more explanatory especially with regards to one's passion or experience in the field for which they're applying.
@jagrutinanda323
@jagrutinanda323 4 года назад
This video was really helpful ! Thank you so much :)
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 4 года назад
Glad it was useful! 🙌
@Visitusexamsharkscom
@Visitusexamsharkscom 3 года назад
★★★I used this website topedgewriters.com to help me write my application letter and they did a good job. I only sent them a draft and they wrote a professional letter for me.I recommend that you guys should check them out.★★★
@manasichavan1331
@manasichavan1331 2 года назад
This video helped me to understand what exactly is the personal statement. I also watched other videos there but was not that clear and easy to understand. I followed the steps in this video and my application is approved for LLM program. Thanks a lot ❤
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 2 года назад
You're very welcome
@ranwaalsheikh5105
@ranwaalsheikh5105 3 года назад
Can you talk more about the structure for the personal statement that doesn't have a work experience also how to include extracurriculars.
@maisie1120
@maisie1120 3 года назад
Without work experience, applying for a competitive course like medicine especially at Oxbridge, you barely stand a chance
@clloyd022
@clloyd022 Год назад
Thank you so much for this !! I got accepted into my dream university XD
@Charlie-gq9vu
@Charlie-gq9vu 3 года назад
Wow ok making feel bad about the rubbish I just wrote
@theliopleurodon
@theliopleurodon 3 года назад
Relatableeee
@ultraalvafa4962
@ultraalvafa4962 3 года назад
X2!!! :S
@SaadAli-qv9nf
@SaadAli-qv9nf 9 месяцев назад
Imagine, You are applying for scholarship program and instantly you just scroll and start watching out video of how to write a great Personal Statement while author make you understand by giving a example of your own university Dow University--- wuh proud :)
@shamhammoudi4418
@shamhammoudi4418 3 года назад
Thank you very much
@yasiiic7890
@yasiiic7890 2 года назад
Awesome💕
@suhanirathour5106
@suhanirathour5106 2 года назад
This is the best personal statement... Can you please make a personal statement video for student who choose dentistry
@linzczyra
@linzczyra 3 года назад
I wanted to apply to MIT for next autumn and i was so so so hesitant because I just have no confidence in my personal statement writing and my experiences in uni but after watching your video I guess i'm starting to write it up!!! thank you for these tips
@chaecelestia7352
@chaecelestia7352 3 года назад
Good luck :)
@abrarelidrisi6888
@abrarelidrisi6888 Год назад
Hi how did it go
@the_crackin3610
@the_crackin3610 7 месяцев назад
@linzczyra how did it go
@LonDanDoc
@LonDanDoc 3 года назад
@<a href="#" class="seekto" data-time="166">2:46</a> I'd say 'and although' could be changed to '. Although' It's a gd PS because of the flow and structure. Id recommend students to really pay attention to the way he compound's point on point without sounding too cliché
@amiram1256
@amiram1256 2 года назад
Thank u so much
@aspookyfox
@aspookyfox Год назад
What an impressive candidate profile. I need to organize myself better.
@gamezone7537
@gamezone7537 9 месяцев назад
Good video 🎉❤
@shen7728
@shen7728 4 года назад
Uhhh give me chills😬😬. Amazing vid btw
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 4 года назад
Haha thanks! 🙌
@shen7728
@shen7728 4 года назад
Doctor Shaene is he working with you now?
@ninamay4401
@ninamay4401 2 года назад
Thanks for the video, super helpful! My personal statement is supposed to be only 300 words max. Do you have any tips? I find it quite hard to fit all I want to say into such few words.
@rintaaryani4347
@rintaaryani4347 2 года назад
thanks it help me a lot
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 2 года назад
🙏🏽
@fameliaputri5098
@fameliaputri5098 3 года назад
This is such a great content, but i found some difficulties to keep up with ur speed when u explaining all the materials 😅
@shelbiej94
@shelbiej94 3 года назад
0.75 speed 😘
@camille6873
@camille6873 3 года назад
By any chance, do you proofread essays too? 🥺
@Amal-ow3hf
@Amal-ow3hf 3 года назад
Hi, love your video! What editing software do you use?
@mayathethy1565
@mayathethy1565 3 года назад
I don’t have any work experience coz of corona😢
@jackstannah4800
@jackstannah4800 3 года назад
Maya Thethy exactly the same here. sucks real bad :(
@kazi21029
@kazi21029 3 года назад
Check out BSMS virtual work experience.
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 3 года назад
1. BSMS Virtual work Experience - Brighton and Sussex medical school has put together an incredible online package giving to an insight into the NHS which walks you through different medical specialities. 2. Observe GP - interactive video platform has been put together by the Royal College of GPs designed to give medical school applicants an insight into General Practice and primary care. 3. The NHS Explained Online Course - a free 8 hour online course by the King’s Fund giving you an insight into the structure of the NHS and challenges of working in the NHS. 1.Re-engage - a charity looking for volunteers to join their call companion service to provide some friendship to lonely and isolated older people 2.Covid-19 Mutual Aid - a service connecting people in the local area to help others who are more vulnerable or self-isolating. 3.The Sliver Line - a confidential helpline that provides advice, friendship and information to older people. They currently have an emergency appeal for volunteers. 4.Age UK - lots of different opportunities to volunteer to become a digital buddy, a campaigner or fundraiser for the Age UK charity.
@LonDanDoc
@LonDanDoc 3 года назад
Guys exploration of medicine isn't just work experience. It's volunteering in the community esp in health and social care environments, speaking with drs and med student s and other health care staff . Reading books on medicine etc.
@michellef609
@michellef609 3 года назад
@@jackstannah4800 Look into being a medical scribe
@abenarhtuesday
@abenarhtuesday Год назад
I want an introduction for Accounting and Finance And also a best conclusion New subscriber here
@gracewilliams1227
@gracewilliams1227 3 года назад
Can’t lie this is not the best personal statement I have ever read for medicine ha
@nitesh10
@nitesh10 3 года назад
I agree. It doesn't really show that the student is curious about medicine.
@nitesh10
@nitesh10 3 года назад
@@Lauren-7777 To me, it looks more like a statement for a nursing course. And he said he read papers but he did not really show it; he could've written what he likes about these papers to lend some credibility.
@jameshowlett2694
@jameshowlett2694 2 года назад
It looks more like a list of things the student has done, it has the best ingredients for it but isn’t good itself
@CreativeeLifestyle
@CreativeeLifestyle 3 года назад
Most personal statements should be a link between cv and extra curriculum/learnings and he did it in a very good way.
@Eludinium
@Eludinium Год назад
The first paragraph appears as what other sources describe as "flowery language", there are so many conflictions as this is a subjectively judged document, I'm still confused as to what is wanted and how I may be judged..
@rudhrarekapally3330
@rudhrarekapally3330 2 года назад
He should have linked the sop to download , That can help us to read and understand
@person6979
@person6979 3 года назад
Yo I’ve never seen this video but I followed this EXACT structure when I wrote mine, that’s kinda cool🤔
@essaywriter5586
@essaywriter5586 3 года назад
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@spoofynator
@spoofynator 3 года назад
Can we get a link to this statement you’re referring to? I really need to see the format .
@barrettoliver2009
@barrettoliver2009 3 года назад
What I hate is that I'm being told to avoid flowery language , but all the best statements contain flowery language
@matthewwestwell9151
@matthewwestwell9151 3 года назад
I reckon it depends where you're applying. Most unis don't really care about it but some like Oxbridge and London ones that are more traditional and academic might prefer it. It's always good to link your personal statement to the universities you're applying to like traditional/integrated
@eugenie2413
@eugenie2413 3 года назад
hey great video! Can I have the full personal statement for reference ?
@sharon3397
@sharon3397 3 года назад
Hey, when writing a personal statement for physician associate do I also use the key term “medicine” As I’m not exactly a doctor ??
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 3 года назад
yeahh i'd say medicine is an apt key word - it's not specific just to doctors but all healthcare team members no?
@darrenjosiah9246
@darrenjosiah9246 2 года назад
me learning Spanish for 5 years... <a href="#" class="seekto" data-time="335">5:35</a> aight, it's my time to shine.
@navinafrancis3273
@navinafrancis3273 3 года назад
Please share how to write a good reflection essay
@aryasatre8738
@aryasatre8738 3 года назад
Is this personal statement for undergrad med or post-grad? And what do you suggest the format should be for students applying for 2021 seeing as we can't get work experience?
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 3 года назад
work experience is still legit in 2021! 1. BSMS Virtual work Experience - Brighton and Sussex medical school has put together an incredible online package giving to an insight into the NHS which walks you through different medical specialities. 2. Observe GP - interactive video platform has been put together by the Royal College of GPs designed to give medical school applicants an insight into General Practice and primary care. 3. The NHS Explained Online Course - a free 8 hour online course by the King’s Fund giving you an insight into the structure of the NHS and challenges of working in the NHS. 1.Re-engage - a charity looking for volunteers to join their call companion service to provide some friendship to lonely and isolated older people 2.Covid-19 Mutual Aid - a service connecting people in the local area to help others who are more vulnerable or self-isolating. 3.The Sliver Line - a confidential helpline that provides advice, friendship and information to older people. They currently have an emergency appeal for volunteers. 4.Age UK - lots of different opportunities to volunteer to become a digital buddy, a campaigner or fundraiser for the Age UK charity.
@busyllee
@busyllee 2 года назад
helpful
@ramdinakar5114
@ramdinakar5114 3 года назад
Great video man! Would you be able to give feedback on my personal statement if I emailed it to you ? Thanks
@fakhrulzainal5384
@fakhrulzainal5384 3 года назад
I feel impressed at his PS and depressed looking at mine lol
@maeganjoseph8377
@maeganjoseph8377 3 года назад
This video is very inspiring. I am trying to develop my personal statement for Pharmacy school. Do you have any advice on how to merge desire, work and life experiences, and faith in my personal statement?
@WriteYourAcceptance
@WriteYourAcceptance 3 года назад
I love Pharm PS! You have a great opportunity to blend community minded values with your personal passion and life experiences. Consider thinking about starting with - in story form - an interaction with a patient/ customer If you work at a pharmacy already. what did they need? how did you help them? then par 2 could be your explanation of desire and passion for the field and why...then middle could be a couple other life / work experiences and how they have taught you diff lessons about pharmacy and your pursuit of pharmacy. good luck!
@emilycarter8922
@emilycarter8922 2 года назад
You might want to check this out ru-vid.com/video/%D0%B2%D0%B8%D0%B4%D0%B5%D0%BE-5ZUgT5cgTg0.html
@maeganjoseph8377
@maeganjoseph8377 2 года назад
@@emilycarter8922 thanks! Will do.
@KA-yl7nq
@KA-yl7nq 4 года назад
When is your skillshare masterclass going to be available for us? :)
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 4 года назад
Working hard to get it out to everyone next week. Getting through more personal statements to analyse and chucking in new points! Will let everyone know when it’s out via email with some extra goodies! :)
@KA-yl7nq
@KA-yl7nq 4 года назад
Doctor Shaene oooh okay thank you!
@smak2904
@smak2904 2 года назад
Please guide how to write proposal for PhD in psychology at Cambridge University.
@DeGoya
@DeGoya 2 года назад
could you please share a link to this statement? I'm not too keen on typing it off the screen
@hangkertzy9722
@hangkertzy9722 3 года назад
damn that guy is.. very achieving
@SID-nr4lz
@SID-nr4lz Год назад
and here’s me struggling to get into dow medical university 😭 xD
@laylaalansari9137
@laylaalansari9137 2 года назад
I’m writing my personal statement for bachelor degree (undergrad), and I’m mentioning the major that i want, but, is it okay to mention the grad degree major that i want to take after bachelor ?
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