The Black Ship - Chapter 28 

2 Chapters of The Black Ship in the same week?, you spoiling us!, thank you so much for all the hard work.

I am ADDICTED to this story

Great episode! "Composters?" Very utilitarian, as in "we will make our enemies into something good!" LOL!!!

I enjoyed this story very much. I replay many times and still haven't lost interest. I live off the grid and glad that I can listen to every new chapter as it comes out. Hope that this continues for it keeps my sanity living out here with my nearest human neighbor being five miles from me. Please continue sending this story out for us to enjoy

Can’t wait for the “composters,” to take out the trash! Also, generally curious what Wyatt’s shield and motto will be.

Here we go, final video of work day and it’s our favorite story. The crew thanks you both!

ooooh more looks into the enemy thanks for another good story poor wyatt being put upon by being loyal and competent

Binged in three days. Now eagerly awaiting more with the rest of you. Clara has done quite well with Cynthia and now Wyatt at her side. What a team!!

What a pleasant after dinner treat two chapters in one week , thank you to the author ✍️. The continued background on the evil Duke/Uncle helps fill in the background from the opposition. Clearly the Duke’s team is too entrenched in their thinking 🤔 to think outside the box. The prince’s outside the box thinking 🤔 and his embracing the in the right place at the right time with Wyatt in the long run will hopefully provide a catalyst to push the principality into a new age. Commander Redford’s tactful guidance to Wyatt is a nice touch . He does not issue an order but instead sets out the factual guidance to allow Wyatt to allow Wyatt to constructively grow as a person and an officer. As a personal note I would hope that those who can and have the wherewithal are thanking the page sponsor and the Author. Thank you until the next chapter 🥃🍾

I love that the villain is respectable and understandable. History truly is written by the victor.

Sweet another chapter on my birthday thank you

Well that felt complicated, the Duke is not a very happy fellow and his daughter sounds like a psycho on a short leash

Love it. Such an awesome story.

This is one of the best stories I’ve come across on RU-vid. Each chapter leads me to want more.

Thanks!

The composters sounds more like a drazan squad than a human one 😆🌴🎋

Interesting this chapter starts with Duke Cornelius Draymore, the 1st time we see him since chapter 19 in book 1. Nice we get to see the the inner circle of Cornelius's allies. I do like how Cornelius still respects the Prince to degree. Cornelius is smart in trying to make sure the coup between houses and not a civil war. I do love the scene where Tamiran Caystion admits the blunder Samuel Caystion at Gintrax costed there side lots of high tech ships 🚢. I do like see how the coup is going from Cornelius side. I do like hearing how by sounds House Windfield has a massive for assembling and have 3 battleships. I do like how Cornelius does want the military academies for the national military armed forces to be left alone and no trying to get personal from them. Its smart of Cornelius telling his followers to use passive means as much possible to calm the commoners and only use surgical strikes ages the most rebellious commoners. I do like how Cornelius has Tamiran a more detailed explanation on interesting seeing that the battle of Gintrax the Caystion force were supposed to have more ships but they didn't get there do to Drazin raiders and Finigan forces. I do like how pissed off Hadrion is with the loss of Frederick Anderson due to him personally recruited to their cause. Interesting to hear Luxax's brother sided with Cornelius. It seems that Veronica is few fries short of a Happy Meal. I do like the detailed explanation on the FTL communications network of the Principality of Astor. Not surprised that Cornelius does fear the RM due them stuck in places that make them not much of a threat to him. Awesome catch phrase for House Draymore. I do love ❤️ Wyatt's choice for his squadron name being " Composterse." Its hilarious 😂 that Redford freaking out with Wyatt's Heraldic Shield. I do like how Redford realized that Wyatt's problem is due to ignorance. It does seem that the author is paying attention to the comments section since the Heraldic Shield for Wyatt shows it. I do like how the problem is there is too much on the Heraldic Shield 🛡. Nice history lesson on Redford's House Calin Heraldic Shield 🛡 . I am not surprised that there's a noble tradition that making a Heraldic Shield is to be made on your own. It will be interesting seeing Wyatt interacting with his Eplsion teammates for the 1st time since he became a noble. I have a feeling that Wyatt will at first have friction with the new 5th member of his squadron but will end up good friends by the end of a Terran month. Will be interesting in seeing the Finigan nobles reaction to Wyatt.

As the song says "Loving every minute of it"

Well, the compost hauler represents both his origin, as well as his ingenuity to succeed with whatever tools he has at his disposal. And crazy enough to be recognized as *THE Wyatt Staples* later on. The hauler's gonna stick.

Composters. Oh lawdy.

So many views, so few likes🤨 Like people, the author, narrator and Wyatt deserves better.Thank you,2chapters in one week 💐⭐❣️⭐💐

I'm hooked ! This is great ! I can't wait for the next one 💯❤️‍🔥💫

Should odds be set to start betting on the Cynthia vs Veronica duel? Now that Veronica's personality has been introduced, a duel has to be in the future.

Thank you. Another great chapter. By far greatest story in all you tube sci fi comunity.

I must admit Redford is right, on both accounts. I would say the Squadron name coud be the Defenders ( protecting the Innocent) and his sheld could be a castle tower with 3 six pointed stars above it on a black back ground. Showing part of his oath to House Aster ( again showing his oath to protect). And his love of space. Thoughts on this?

I would love to see longer chapters .Evan if it took longer to get them out

"Loyalty is my reward"would be a good motto for Wyatt's heraldic shield.

What a great chapter. Both in scope and in explanation. I really love the details shared by Redford at the end. Perfect. Thank you both, writer and video guy.

Composters - What you do with weeds and dead organic matter. What they will do to those plantoid aliens called the Drazzan. A fitting end to those monsters since that's what they do to humans when preparing their feed.

Thanks for another episode. When will we begin to learn what the Duke thinks is wrong with the prince or why Veronica is so fervent?

This was a surprise to have two episodes this week. I really wish we understood why the Duke feels that the Prince is unworthy, and his inner circle call him a false Prince. Veronica is just as Gabrial said a pet that understands nothing other that to ask her father how high to jump when he says jump, or when he says sit, to ask where to sit. Wyatt's shield will be interesting, but really the Composters as the squad name. I really liked Redford's little lecture, it is teaching Wyatt that being a noble is a lot more than he thought. Cynthia needs to give him more lessons than just battle exercises. She and Clara need to explain the meaning of naming the ship, since previous chapters indicated that there was more behind it, his reaction to whatever the meaning is will probably be interesting. I'd love to see Redford and maybe Gault teaching Wyatt what it really means to be an officer and a noble.

this might be the best story here. cam you get more like it

Poor Samuel getting thrown under the bus by Tamiran. Lol.

Duke Draymore thinks far to much of himself which is a common trait among the nobles but it seems that there is either something that the prince or the king (before he died) has done that set Draymore off on this coup or the man is so full of himself that he can't accept any truth but the fiction he believes. It seems our author might be taking some of his ideas from current events. And this was another great addition to the story. With a bit more insight into the inner workings of the opposition and the learning curve of Wyatt, the universe continues to grow in detail.

Loving this

I watched the 11 hours long segment which had from chapter 1 to 26 in it & then 27 & 28 right afterwards, but now I'm feeling frustrated waiting for 29.

Beautiful story love it ❤❤❤

2 in a week? Hype!

I'm glad the shield, or at least the first iteration had the garbage hauler on it... hope it says but it might have some call back to Wyatt thinking about his family again. Hell it may have one of those Lachoa bugs on it and quote from his dad.

thank you for your stories man I like them...

This takes me back to the works of Dickson and Laumer. Well done!

I love this series listen to both books in the last 3 days

please actually do make the design for us

Well that's the poletiek taking care of... There are roles about your noble shields that must be fallowd.. 1e your lord's hous then your house and strength.. The colour of your lord then add yours... Tip from a historical perspective 😅

Yeah buddy

Thanks 😊

we need more. A lot more.

CHOP CHOP bud. Need more

More please !

Booo! Booo! Duke Traitormore.

Good story.

Aaah, with such sharp mind as that of Wyatt and knowing the weight of his enoblement one could think that after good think he could come up with fitting shield and even name for his squadron. I kind of feel a bit dissapointed in his choices. Otherwise solid chapter

Thank you

2 in one week 😀😀😀 thanks😘

The shuttle should be kept A wreath of burning vines? Motto Ever loyal Ever humble Should be KISS enough

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Loving it!

If I were Wyatt, I'd have a black field with tiny white and silver dots( symbolizing his childhood longing for space) and have those vines drape over the top, left, and right borders with flames starting at only the bottom of the vines (symbolizing his victory over his childhood monsters and reason for his ennoblement) But the Commander might think the flames still to flashy and loud

I am eager to catch up!

Eh with all that advanced technology, they are amazed by a healthy 80 year old? Really? Might want to change that age if this ever goes to print

He's not a false prince

Duke Draymore sounds like a Perfectly reasonable Man . Not an Evil despot . But his own Son is against him and Prince Astor , his Nephew , was elevated over him . I wonder what the REAL story is . Veronica seems like the Draymore version of Julianna Winfield .

Only just started listening to these amazing stories. Could someone explain how long we wait usually for next chapter? Chapter 30?

Wyatt's banner should be the shape of the black ship, with a hand holding a sword up from the bottom, with a motto of victory over treason. Just my opinion.

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Draymore: "This must not become a war. It is only a question of succession." Bruh, there's shooting and killing. This is a war. Just looking at history with all the European Wars of Succession in the past two thousand years, and Draymore trying to delude himself and his traitorous ilk that the piss on his leg is, in fact, rain makes me want to facepalm.

When chapter 29 expected

I am late I late let’s go get them WYATT😅😅😅😅😊😊😊🎉🎉🎉🎉

I wonder if this episode gave away the name of the as-still-unknown killer of Fredrick (from Chapter 27)

Affter norinavio idk what anyone expected from staples composters is decent name cause squad name is not very needed and affter all he did techically take out the trash which got him a squadron but the shield yeah i can agree with redford bit to much and etc but i probably shouldnt say crap cause well id prob do the same as wyatt maybe not as much as him but maybe close but in all honesty considering some traditions of medievil times best way to make a shield for your house or order one that can be put onto a shield not too big detailed and more oh yeah i just rembered something i know for a fact no one would like it but wyatt should of done a uh was it luca or something like that

When the nxxt chapter? i want more.

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The prince and Clara's father was the duke's younger brother was he assassinated

Is Jade, Hadrian's brother?

Does anyone knows when chapter 29 will be available?

What a bunch of megalomaniacs !

Yeah pretty sure this a ghost writer. You can't really hide style and the mind behind it.

Tem toda a razão e eu não gostando de compras a prestações reconheço que não sou muito bom a economizar mas dívidas isso não ⛔

Different AI voice?

The duke isnt outright evil, interesting take on this style of story

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Can we get an ETA of ch. 29?

Once again asking for this to start getting posted to HFY again.

Wyatt’s heraldic shield should be a clixal

Thank you for the second chapter in one week. The story gets more intriguing with each chapter.