"The Fight" by Vincent V. Cava | CreepyPasta Storytime

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Vincent V Cava's story for this Creepy Pasta Storytime is a masterpiece that will play with your heart strings. In all seriousness one of my new favorites from the guy
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@DustWarden 8 лет назад

I love how he threw in "oh, and your mom and your childhood dog are here, too" to take down anyone not already reduced to tears.

@robertcampbell3019 5 лет назад

My god I love this story

@unixone7558 8 лет назад

I've said it before, I'll say it again, and I'll be dead before I take it back. Vincent V. Cava is the Internet's Stephen King.

@CreeperBusters1000 8 лет назад

+Unix One Vincent V Cava is the best writer I have ever listened to

@unixone7558 8 лет назад

Saul Goodman When it comes to the horror genre, I must agree.

@mathijss.8347 8 лет назад

he is not, king does not plaguraise

@unixone7558 8 лет назад

Mathijs Saccol Has Cava plagiarized? Do you have proof of that?

@mathijss.8347 8 лет назад

Unix One well not exactly but some of him stories are copied from others and barely rewritten but have a bit more detail

@HollyAnne1095 8 лет назад

*Sees Vincent's name, drops everything and listens* There are no words to describe Vincent's writing, he is the master of emotions and invites you on the rollercoaster with him. Beautiful and passionate descriptions alongside the figure of death made this story hauntingly beautiful. Outstanding :)

@Alex-kk7bg 8 лет назад

He described his writing as well as Vincent would! :D

@miguelsosa6107 8 лет назад

I came to fear, not to feel

@kitkat9106 Год назад

Word 🤣

@GraxBishop 8 лет назад

10:59 - "Starting teeing off for him mmMMmmm" MCP getting all excited about the fight huh?

@Shi3i4lyf 8 лет назад

Damn, this was a roller coaster ride.

@xX_Thaddeus_Xx 8 лет назад

_This needs to be a short film._

@acario100 8 лет назад

Jesus, Papyrus, why are you so scary?

@hydra7094 8 лет назад

+AceArion cus he always has a boner

@GebTM 8 лет назад

+Hydra NHYEEEEEEE

@xX_Thaddeus_Xx 8 лет назад

Actually thinking about this, I've realized it could work well as a Feature-Length film as well. It could simply go slightly more in-depth into the character backstories of DeMarco and Dmitri. It could even alternate between the two up until the fight so that you got attached to both characters, leading to viewers being conflicted about who they'd want to see win.

@spellofthedead3317 7 лет назад

yYYYEEEESSSS

@VincentVenaCava 8 лет назад

Everyone love a good fight! If you liked my spooky story, then give me a follow!

@alicecheshire7954 8 лет назад

Awesome

@VincentVenaCava 8 лет назад

Gracias

@austinjohnson6642 8 лет назад

I love your work

@noahhoyt9269 8 лет назад

Anything by you is stellar and this one is no exception so far

@VincentVenaCava 8 лет назад

+Austin Johnson Thanks, dude.

@OmnipotentNoodle 8 лет назад

This isn't a creepypasta. it's an adorapasta.

@jamillacharles8648 8 лет назад

lol

@JeanLucCanas 8 лет назад

lol, I was thinking the same thing!

@weeboltsrock 8 лет назад

+Robert DiRosa its a feelspasta

@brijohnson7493 8 лет назад

+taylor duff what's a feelpasta

@sage_thedragon 8 лет назад

+Robert DiRosa I was crying at the ending

@xXFleshadictMCXx 8 лет назад

I love these long stories because I can listen to them in the background as I do things. Also, the longer ones are usually the best ones because the most effort is put into them.

@flurrygeizo9927 8 лет назад

same here..the longer ones r usually the good ones..

@lanthelancer 8 лет назад

Normally someone has to explain complicated creepypastas to me, but I knew that woman was a reaper the moment they mentioned her. Good job me!

@thegoodfather1177 8 лет назад

+Kai Wheeler in an alternate story, the reaper is pale with long red hair and a great red overcoat.

@jaysonmakesmusic 8 лет назад

Vincent is probably the best creepy pasta writer that you've ever narrated

@AGC517 8 лет назад

Micheal Whitehouse is a bit more consistent...

@robertcampbell3019 5 лет назад

@@AGC517 ok

@DrCreepen 8 лет назад

You're on absolutely top form with this one, Mr. CP. Well done.

@willow_jayde 2 года назад

And vincent! He wrote it :)

@Rahim103.5 10 месяцев назад

I love the way each character is built (specifically dmitri and dimarco) to add a distinctive layer with every detail of the fight having substance and adding suspense till the very end. Bravo Vince!

@sweefspusswau6289 8 лет назад

I was in the middle of writing an mma creepypasta, looks like I've been beaten to the punch.

@jhart19963 8 лет назад

Ha!

@bravo075 8 лет назад

+Sweefs Pusswau get out.

@arthas640 8 лет назад

+Sweefs Pusswau That's a pretty punny joke you did there :D

@leesscribbles 8 лет назад

you most certainly were

@onthegogaming109 8 лет назад

+SpyOverlord fat

@stevemichael652 8 лет назад

I thought this was going to end different. I was believing that when the woman became decreped and he was about to lose the fight, he'd see his daughter in the third knock out and urge him to get back up and re awaken, ultimately knocking out the Russian with a last desperate blow. I thought the woman personified his addiction and demons and seeing his daughter would give him the will to survive and not only just win the fight, but overcome the woman personifying his addiction. The way she hovered in the ring made it seem like Demarco was also fighting his demons as well as the Russian. Still an amazing ending and my top 3 creepy pastas because of the emotion it evoked. I honestly love the way it ended I just wanted to offer what I was thinking :)

@saintsfps5348 6 лет назад

nah, even two knockouts will end a fight, 3 is just unrealistic

@hayleyclark2711 7 лет назад

The 'Hmmmm' after the mispronunciation was too cute lol. I could sense the fleeting frustration, although didn't notice the actual mistake? Mr creepypastaperfectionist exellent job as always

@glassraven91 8 лет назад

He started teeing off on himmmmmmmmmmm xP

@vaniumvii6453 8 лет назад

xxxPPPPP

@neo-ys4go 8 лет назад

I heard that and came to the comments to see if someone pointed it out XD

@johnathonturpin9430 4 года назад

Dont worry just a small strok

@cobracurse 8 лет назад

So, in a sense, the "woman in the black dress" blessed both fighters in the ring.

@glassraven91 8 лет назад

+cobracurse I like how you put that. Thank you.

@ohnoitsseth3710 8 лет назад

+cobracurse or she could have been death.

@migs4782 8 лет назад

She blessed both fighters, sure, but at the expense of the poor referee. Everyone's gonna be giving him shit for being an irresponsible official when he was actually being possessed by a sexy/gross ghost lady.

@migs4782 8 лет назад

***** Yup. Even in a sport about beating the shit out of each other, guilt can really get to you.

@CaptainFrightNite 8 лет назад

Amazing job on the story, dude! I played it in my boxing gym infront of 100 boxers and you even managed to make a few of them tear up.They all said to tell you that you did an incredible job. Keep up the amazing work! Very proud. ;)

@witchcraft3853 8 лет назад

That's awesome :)

@niemandvannobody7394 8 лет назад

11:02 gave me a straight chuckle, so glad you kept that part in.

@redsagehorrorwitz6453 8 лет назад

The ending just left me in tears. This entire story is best described in one word... ... perfect.

@AnymousScreams 8 лет назад

I honestly loved this one, it's so simple, so chilling at certain points, but so rewarding at the end.

@themeatman6984 8 лет назад

This isnt a good creepypasta story..... it's an amazing story!

@snakeguy8646 8 лет назад

+Tony the electric ninja Vincent never disappoints.

@Fish-ld3sl 8 лет назад

The winner is..... LITTLE MAC.

@Hamza-ml2zr 8 лет назад

omg i hate you-_-

@Streifen1911 2 года назад

this is in my top 10 id say. so much going on in one ring. it’s sad yet heartwarming & you’re rooting for him to win.

@DJScootagroov 8 лет назад

this one wasn't creepy. it was acctually...heart warming.

@HaloEchoe419 8 лет назад

I put this story on my playlist a few days ago and totally forgot about it. When it came up I was absolutely hooked from the beginning... (pun intended) so when I checked the authors name and saw it was by Vincent V. Cava I laughed and said out loud of course... I've said this before and I'll say it again, Vincent V. Cava has written 3 of my most favorite creepypastas of all time, he's definitely my favorite author. Love you Vincent! keep up the amazing stories!

@SleepPara 8 лет назад

A very seasoned horror author...

@protatype7487 8 лет назад

Brought to us by a very seasoned horror narrator. Sounds perfect.

@Nickowar 8 лет назад

Mr. Cava inspires me to become a writer..Love this one, also love MCP's Beautiful voice to make it really come to life...Though, my favorite will always be 'Favor for a favor.'

@Metalbornforce 7 лет назад

I'm actually crying.... Someone make this into a movie, then give it an Oscar.

@HedgieDaUmbrehog 8 лет назад

Having lost my own kid, that ending put tears in my eyes. Well played Mr. Cava, well played

@oscarlindehey7512 8 лет назад

Oh i am so sorry to hear that ;/

@patarsatar 8 лет назад

+Hedgie The Umbrehog So sorry for your loss! It was a great pasta...

@HedgieDaUmbrehog 8 лет назад

Life happens, you know? Can only keep her memory in my heart as I live on and try to be a dad she would have looked up to. Thank you for the kind words tho ^^ And yes, this creepypasta was absolutely fantastic!

@letsnotfallasleephescoming350 6 лет назад

Stay strong for her

@Azurite.. 8 лет назад

This was such a beautifully written story it got so many different emotions going while listening to it. I'll admit I got choked a few times especially towards the end. Bravo Vincent!!!

@DrMite 8 лет назад

I did not come here for a feel pasta! I did enjoy it though.

@qmanization2375 8 лет назад

Am I the only one who cracked up at 11:04? I love you so much Mr. CreepyPasta xD

@GitraSilvermane 8 лет назад

Saw the twist coming but still a damn good story. Vincent V Cava is quickly becoming one of my favorite writers.

@Amethyst_Spark 8 лет назад

That ending was beautiful T_T

@patrickmcnamara9489 7 лет назад

This really touched my heart and used the elements of horror but wasn't completely horror. Beautiful ending.

@phantomsamurai8715 8 лет назад

He died in the ring... that's pretty sad man... I thought he was killing himself but I wasn't sure...

@sarahrosejenkins8947 7 лет назад

I love that CreepyPasta switched it up a little. It wasn't terrifying or thrilling...just good old fashioned incredible writing complimenting an intense story. I love that Vincent included the background of important characters. It gives the readers/listeners such a wider perspective of the setting, as well as a more vivid image to the story. My wholehearted compliments to this author. I strive to write like you.

@Jonahkiin 8 лет назад

10:59 "Teeing off for em hmmmmmm"

@witchcraft3853 8 лет назад

lmao xD

@CharmingCharmanderz 8 лет назад

I love that little "mmmmmm" pause you took when you re-read that line I'm too lazy to look up.

@minnowbreath 8 лет назад

Choo choo! All aboard the feels train! Would you like to cry? -Yes -Did you think you had a choice?

@butchtunnelsnakes7554 8 лет назад

Oh boy, it's a long one!

@Ghost7065 8 лет назад

that's what she said!!

@Ghost7065 8 лет назад

no but in all seriousness, it was a good one too!

@mello3724 8 лет назад

True

@toxicmrkrabsgame297 8 лет назад

+Butch Tunnel Snakes that's what she said ;)

@toxicmrkrabsgame297 8 лет назад

That's is I forgot the IS type o it's supposed to be that is what she said

@ronaldremus3468 8 лет назад

When ever I see a V. Cava story I freak out.

@musikmuskat7864 8 лет назад

that sound in 11:00 was beautiful. I love how he just continued on like no big deal! goals

@RukonTheCreator 8 лет назад

More of a feelpasta than a creepypasta. I love it. :3

@PeculiarVisitor 8 лет назад

yeah I agree

@fumomofumosarum5893 8 лет назад

+Riku-The-Thief boxing sports pasta.

@Justispeed 8 лет назад

The kids voice you mad was hilarious I was trying to take it all seriously but I couldn't keep it together when you tried to speak as the kid lmao

@Mrdubstep50cal 8 лет назад

Goddamn feelspastas, that was some movie type shit.

@alejandrowilliams9178 4 года назад

The way suspense is built in this story is excellent and bittersweetness of the ending sticks with you.

@loganlovesdubstep 8 лет назад

Vincent V Cava is a legend

@yonjawa 8 лет назад

Despite varying from Cava's usual style, this was excellent. Not only was it gripping, but it was a masterful description of the fight. Well done, indeed.

@Mikey41701 8 лет назад

Not really a creepypasta, but dammit, it's a great story and a heartwarming ending.

@kiralonely1307 2 года назад

Love me some Vincent V. Cava, and as always was excited to listen in lmao! Fantastic as always. Love that man's work, istg, and MCP narrates it beautifully.

@jihyostanxoxo 8 лет назад

I think this was the right outcome. Demarco was already given a shot at life, while the Russian kid was barely starting his.

@kayloreve97 8 лет назад

This story was freakin amazing the writing the rollercoaster of suspense and emotion, but for me the music used in the sound cloud version while they were trading blows just seemed more appropriate to.....capturing the grit and tenacity of their fight more. The change between the two was staggering for me in the other version I was a lot more hyped for how this story was going to conclude then when that myuuji dropped it felt like someone had set off a feels bomb...... both versions the god damn feels! Great narration and great writing yet again well done.

@johnguereca 8 лет назад

that was super intense the whole way through. great story

@shaneminer4526 2 года назад

They say that fight scenes are very difficult to write. It's a delicate balance between actions described and all the other details. Mr VC wrote this splendidly, and Mr CP narrated it superbly.

@CreeperBusters1000 8 лет назад

11:00 "And started teeing off on hmmmmmmmm" *restarts*

@elliotth9674 8 лет назад

This is the one Vincent V Cava story I've heard that I wasn't really unnerved by. It was actually really sweet. I liked it a lot

@amandi539 8 лет назад

I swear it's just sweat coming out of my eyes

@bevkenny1843 6 лет назад

Wow... I'm speechless. That. Is your best reading yet. Absolutely breathtaking. Wonderfully narrated. Your heart & soul went into that. Well done Sir. Well done.

@breannaroth5572 8 лет назад

Anyone else keep thinking of Rocky?

@BazookaJoey69 8 лет назад

yes, that's the first that I thought of haha

@aderangedchair-wieldingman9168 7 лет назад

*me thinking of Hajime no Ippo*

@owengustafson4641 6 лет назад

@htrland 4 года назад

I think this story is more realistic than the plot of Rocky, with regards to the result of the boxing match (excluding the supernatural elements).

@marie-annerioux8988 8 лет назад

wow!! that is the most sad story ever... i have tears in my eyes just by imagining the scene... great job Vincent Vena Cava :)

@MCWaxC 8 лет назад

So he died? Wow. Honestly, I know it sounds weird, but that's actually a fairly happy ending if you think about it.

@JosiahLovelace 8 лет назад

I thought so too. The Russian kid got to go on from that fight and he got reunited with his daughter. I thought it was fantastic. I was rooting for the main character until I heard the Russian kid's backstory and then I started rooting for him. But luckily, I got an ending I was happy with.

@scarymovieman1 8 лет назад

Holy hell this guy is a fucking genius, incredible story...

@sapphirejaxxgh8639 8 лет назад

Damn.... This story has me thinking about life and all the horrible things I've done, and about how much love and beauty there is all around us despite all the ugliness. Jeeze.....

@bethdavis6933 7 лет назад

Anytime you put MrCreepyPasta and VvCava together...pure magic

@akiboi9636 8 лет назад

That story wasn't scary it was nice, I mean he's reunited with his daughter.

@SeymourKilmore 8 лет назад

Oh my GOD Vincent is incredibly dynamic, never seen him write anything like this. This made me fucking cry.

@ClockworkCryptid 8 лет назад

".... and started teeing (?????) off for mmmMMMMmmmmmmmmm~ (?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?????????!!!!!!!!!???????)"

@Thomas_Winters 7 лет назад

that "nnnnnn" chilled me more than the rest of the stories I've listened to...

@gardenwithoutbirds 7 лет назад

SAME OMFG XD

@AngriestGinger 8 лет назад

Cava you are a heartless beast.

@samswift102 8 лет назад

How so?

@AngriestGinger 8 лет назад

Samuel Swift my FEELS.

@miamicode7117 8 лет назад

Am I the only one that waits for a Vincent V. Cava story just like Christmas?

@redultra4324 8 лет назад

You know, some people have the decent to mark these as feelspasta. I'm trying to get all spooked, but nooooo, I'm reminded I have a soul and tear ducts

@loriellis8551 3 года назад

That was enthralling! I listened twice. Great job, @MrCreepyPasta ! THIS is why you are celebrating ten years; you’re the King of Narration. Xoxo

@rhyshopgood3235 8 лет назад

Lik if u cry evry tim

@petrikondrejko8941 8 лет назад

Can i dislike? Plz :c

@rhyshopgood3235 8 лет назад

No! Wy u b hppy lik mes plz

@petrikondrejko8941 8 лет назад

+rhys hopgood k i lik

@kakashi341girl 8 лет назад

this story was seriously amazing, you told it perfectly and it was written really well

@Julie_jul 8 лет назад

Who else cried at the end 😭

@cassandrawright2781 8 лет назад

First it was Borrasca. Then it was the Advent Calender. And now this. I.Am.Broken. Amazing story. Amazing narration. Damn u MCP. Damn u for reducing me to a puddle of tears. I'm bloody weeping. Wow.Just.Wow.

@cultist9591 8 лет назад

Story reminds me of Southpaw, which is also a really good movie.

@JezebelNeverDied 8 лет назад

+Chrishtin I was thinking of that too. "Hmm, child custody, drug addiction, boxing.....Southpaw?"

@cappucosmico 8 лет назад

never in my life did i expect that i'd hear a creepypasta use the whole 'exotic' description for a black lady and i have no words

@insertname6045 6 лет назад

Damn I’m late! (That’s an understatement) but does the woman metaphorically represent DeMarco’s fall from grace?

@southlindbergh2283 6 лет назад

I'm pretty sure the woman is Death. Rather than a cloaked skeleton with a scythe, Death was represented as a beautiful woman in a black dress.

@sillyrabbit7485 8 лет назад

Great Great Great story by VVC. Perfect delivery by MCP. A 10 out of 10, a 100 out of 100...Expectacularrrr en espanol.

@70silentalpacas75 8 лет назад

"How many fingers am I holding up?" "Three." "What's the score?" "27 - 36." "What's your name?" "I'm Batman."

@muthanuka2 8 лет назад

that story was nothing short of incredible! wow, I can't believe I just heard that. .really well done! !

@oscarhample 7 лет назад

11:01 what the fuck was that? mmmMMMmm

@jasontodd4461 7 лет назад

Evan Hample mispronunciation of a word the mmmm sets the words back I do it too so

@oscarhample 7 лет назад

Ohh okay, thanks for clarifying.

@yondokay5280 8 лет назад

this is a testimony to show not all creepypasta is scary but some are beautiful and heartfelt

@jakeberry9532 8 лет назад

who was rooting for the Russian after hearing his story?

@TheLukebrace10 8 лет назад

Kinda ye

@jakeberry9532 8 лет назад

Luke Brace no shame I was too

@jackdiamanti6576 8 лет назад

+jake berry i felt kinda bad for some reason...but i was as well.

@sorrenpeak4870 8 лет назад

goddamn. This isn't even a creepypasta. But it sure was good. Absolutely fantastic writing and a keen eye for detail.

@c0ven0323 8 лет назад

I'm the 666th comment :)

@Shamshiro 8 лет назад

'I ain't smoldering and incompletely combusted like those guys over there. Even if it's just for a moment I'm gonna burn so bright and so red, I'd dazzle everyone. And all that'll be left is pure white ash...' - Joe Yabuki

@RivaledDarkness1 7 лет назад

I just watched this again, and now I have something in my eye... Again....

@justanobadi6655 3 месяца назад

I imagined "rich" sounding like mickey from Rocky. "GET UP, ROCK!"

@peazekeches8735 8 лет назад

This story is absolutely refreshing.

@raspyraspberries 6 лет назад

Damn this is a good one. Made me cry and it takes a skilled writer to make you like both the protagonist and someone you think would be the antagonist. Really highlights the realism since everything isn't just black and white.

@blazeboswell4533 8 лет назад

I really love the visuals, it really adds a certain creepy vibe to it. Just watching the screen slowly turn can be very unnerving.

@Renniigaed 7 лет назад

LOL 11:02 "mmMmmmm" The sound of MCP makin' a mistake is priceless XD

@Aoimizu2010 8 лет назад

I normally don't commit much but OMG this story is so good! Great job MrCreepyPasta and Vincent Vena Cava you just got yourselves a like. The feels and the struggle was just too strong. :)