You know how fed up you are of the word "diverse" when you listen to this while gaming, that you actually were relieved when the story was over to not hear that word anymore.
To myself . I would be concerned in the fact this NEW SPECIES can be seen by only by humans . Capture humans and find the source of physical abilities . Then if they want to control the Galaxy . One species by one .
Huh. Well. This whole story can be summed up in a couple sentences. “Not a single alien in the entire galaxy has ever heard of the electromagnetic spectrum, and none have ever developed any tech that would let them see anything more than their unaided eyes are capable of. Realizing that humanity can see a slightly different spectrum than any other species, they immediately decide we are all scientific geniuses who are ready to co-rule the galaxy.” I’m sorry, but it’s disappointing and pretty pathetic.