when tin got to floor 10 he also overtook my world record of floor 9 (on tower of watermelon) So sadly i wasnt the first victor because id taken a break but yeah tin is really good
THIS IS ABSOLUTELY MIND BOGGLING LIKE HOW DO YOU BEAT SUCH HARD THINGS LIKE THIS HOLY MOLLIE MAN LIKE I SAW A DOG WITH AN ICECREAM SCOOP RUN PAST AS WILL SAID "HAVBE YOU EVERY SAW A SO FAST DOG?" OMG THAT WAS SIO SCRAZY I LOVSE THIS VIDEO SO MUCHHH
overall i would say this video is very good, but some parts feel very pointless or just smooshed into there for the sake of making the video longer. there are also a couple editing inconsistencies where you just dont make an image fade or have timing on the music a bit off, so thats where i would say to start working on to make your videos way less catching off guard and result a better viewing experience. also, please watch out when slowing things down as they can be REALLY laggy, aswell as trying to find non copyright music by using eproves or something to check if it is or not. but also some slight misinformation is scattered very sparsely around the video, like horrific being a "sub difficulty", i get this mistake but if you already read it out you should remember its actually a TooHard or impossible difficulty. but either way this is very good edit: also, for these types of videos you should probably set a more dramatic ending since the less dramatic it feels the more off it feels
Thank you for the review overall this is just my first documentary style video so i didnt expect everything to be perfect, i will try to fix some of these sooner but this is kinda my style and i just wanted this video out. And also the copyright music i dont find a problem yet since i am not currently that famous. And i am not that good at editing either. But again thank you for telling me.
@@will67723 some of the parts that stretch the video in my opinion are the tower of anger joke video (that part couldve fit in if it was executed more as an actual joke), zone 5 since it didnt really seem that important to make it 1 minute of the video, and whenever the part ended it left me with a confusing thought for why that was mentioned, and the really strange TWO FADES between the zone 5 part and change of song. i wouldnt recommend changing stuff like that rapidly and only once a minute or two. (i wouldve just mentioned it as a small note like 15:06). a little off topic but for toer whenever he actually completes the tower, i would recommend not using his footage since you are presenting HIS work to the audience grammatical first person, while *he* is grammatically second person, and makes it more confusing to watch in cases. i would also like to mention for the part after tocr with the tiered obby rampage and tovh montage, the timing for the song seems very off while watching, since pattern of the music seems 2x faster than the speed of the clips show (OF COURSE I KNOW YOU WANTED TO JUST RELEASE THIS SOON, BUT WANTED TO MENTION). another slight stretch i saw was the pit of misery being introduced, since it didnt really do much except for adding the towers into the actual game and didnt have much impact on the tovh grind other than him doing it in the real game (another thing i wouldve just mentioned as a small note like in 15:06). and at the tomm part it seemed like it couldve jUst BEeN mEnTIoNed AS a sMaLl nOTE lIke iN 15:06 11!! 1! 111!!!! !!!1 OR merged into the next section nicely as i think its worth mentioning, just not realy in the way you presented. now for the start of towm, it just ALSO feels very short and like it couldve been merged (but i have nothing wrong with the montage fading as it feels natural and an excuse to change the song. thats all. i want you to get better as i think you have potential to be amazing, bye!
