The only criticism i have is that his monologue was lacking a bit of speed, and the ferocity that the show's VA had. The voice of the lich was calm, yet it hit deep and hard. The way the VA here was speaking, it felt like he was taking a second to prepare each word/sentence; so he was a bit slower than the original. To be clear i commend the voice actor here for doing such an impressive impression of the lich. However these are just spots for improvement, and i do hope you take this info and use it to help this VA perfect his lich. Sincerely, KMT.