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The Personal Statement That Got Me Into EVERY IVY LEAGUE 

Elise Pham
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The Personal Statement That Got Me Into EVERY IVY LEAGUE
Download my Full Written Course on How to Get Into An Ivy League for FREE: www.ultimateivyleagueguide.com
In this video, I'm going to be revealing the exact personal statement that got me no Ivy League rejections and giving you a step by step outline on how to craft your own unique personal statement so you can stand out to admission officers.
Connect with me on Instagram: @ultimateivyleagueguide
0:06 - Introduction: Challenges of College Admissions
0:16 - Misconceptions about College Essays
0:29 - Revealing a Successful Personal Statement
0:35 - Offer of Full-Length Course Giveaway
0:43 - Sharing the Personal Statement
0:59 - Reading the Personal Statement
1:07 - Breakdown of the Personal Statement
1:19 - Common Application Prompts Overview
1:27 - Tips on What to Avoid in Personal Statements
3:02 - Step 1: Self-Reflection and Exploration
3:08 - Identifying Key Themes
4:03 - Core Values and Beliefs
5:20 - Understanding Different Essay Approaches
6:34 - Considerations for Using Metaphors
7:01 - Example of Using a Metaphor in an Essay
8:39 - Crafting an Effective Introduction and Hook
9:49 - Different Approaches to Writing Hooks
10:51 - Building the Introduction
12:51 - Structuring Body Paragraphs
16:20 - Outline of Body Paragraphs
18:16 - Tips for Seamless Body Paragraph Transitions
21:34 - Example: Personal Statement Body Paragraphs
23:43 - Writing an Effective Conclusion
24:54 - Key Elements of a Conclusion

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Комментарии : 64   
@ultimateivyleagueguide
@ultimateivyleagueguide 14 дней назад
This is just a very tiny snippet of my story. I’ve been gate-keeping this for years, but I want to do my best to help all of you❤ P.S. Watch until the end to learn how to access my FULL guide on How To Get Into Your Dream School for FREE! 😊✅
@opalcat0000
@opalcat0000 10 дней назад
I love your videos so much and was wondering if you could share your common app application with your classes, extracurriculars, etc.
@night.howlersqureshi2019
@night.howlersqureshi2019 8 дней назад
Girl u are seriously the best love u!!!
@lily-ux3fu
@lily-ux3fu 14 дней назад
The fact that she is the most underatted student on youtube and slays and her tips actually work, i cant 😭😭😭
@lily-ux3fu
@lily-ux3fu 14 дней назад
OMG TYSM Elise
@user-lc9pb2fl6r
@user-lc9pb2fl6r 14 дней назад
Do. Not. Delete. This. Ever.
@dylandoggettgames8017
@dylandoggettgames8017 12 дней назад
Nah she needs to delete this before anyone else sees
@emiomg_
@emiomg_ 5 дней назад
@@dylandoggettgames8017 why?
@IrmakT1910
@IrmakT1910 14 дней назад
Thanks to you I got into Oxford University ❤ thank you
@ultimateivyleagueguide
@ultimateivyleagueguide 14 дней назад
I’m SO proud of you❤
@dead8312
@dead8312 14 дней назад
Really?? Congratulations to you!
@severussnapeytp715
@severussnapeytp715 6 дней назад
That's my dream schoooooll :))
@IrmakT1910
@IrmakT1910 6 дней назад
@@severussnapeytp715 if you need any advice on what to do that helps you get in let me know :)
@dead8312
@dead8312 14 дней назад
Omg can't believe you actually posted a video like this, really helpful thanks Elise 😭😭
@DanielHayashi671
@DanielHayashi671 14 дней назад
This was so helpful, especially my upcoming junior year! Thank you! :)
@yuki_santaro806
@yuki_santaro806 12 дней назад
I love you advice. You are so underrated, I swear! Your tips actually work
@ariana-gm7fg
@ariana-gm7fg 4 дня назад
your personal statement was sooo beautiful, i was actually with my mouth open by the time i read the last sentence 😮😮 you're so talented girlll
@user-co7gj9pl1z
@user-co7gj9pl1z 14 дней назад
Thank you so much for posting this!! ❤
@jianingchen1297
@jianingchen1297 13 дней назад
You are so inspiring! I’m already an undergrad in my home country but hopefully I can apply to an Ivy League college for my masters! Thank you!
@RahulGonal
@RahulGonal 14 дней назад
Really a great help. Keep up the good work 👍
@chaiboix
@chaiboix 6 дней назад
Your mom would be so proud of you ❤ God bless you for these tips!
@NandiniC-fz1xf
@NandiniC-fz1xf 13 дней назад
This video is very helpful, thank you for posting it!!!!
@mambappe
@mambappe 13 дней назад
thank you so so much for this video, it's so helpful!!!
@Sid12121
@Sid12121 13 дней назад
You have helped me out a lot, thank you so much!
@yosephra9299
@yosephra9299 13 дней назад
Superb. Appreciate you share this. May you filled with joy ❤
@aqualumina.
@aqualumina. 9 дней назад
Usefulll and amazing tips thank you so much u really helped me throughout my ADmission process, super happy and grateful cause I found you🥺🥺🥺🥺
@leaosly
@leaosly 13 дней назад
i love everything about you man you're an icon 💗
@zainabimran1316
@zainabimran1316 6 дней назад
Thankyouuu soo much elise for your this incredible efforts to get this amazing information to us I'm soo thankful to you ....harvard is my dream university and i genuinely want to go there which is nearly a impossible dream to become true from where i belong to but thats okay i believe on myself and my lord nothing is impossible...again thankyouu my girll thankyouu soo much ...😭❤️🌷🧸🎀🙌🏻
@lhazel3976
@lhazel3976 12 дней назад
im forever thabkful for this. thank you
@mariyamawitsolomon
@mariyamawitsolomon 12 дней назад
you know that you motivate me so much
@bhavinya
@bhavinya 13 дней назад
even though i'd love for her to stay lowkey because i'm not an altruist at all SHE DESERVES SO MUCH MORE AUDIENCE BECAUSE GIRL? you're amazing ❤
@nisargshah1884
@nisargshah1884 13 дней назад
Thank you!! This helped a lot!
@vivianhuang7411
@vivianhuang7411 14 дней назад
i love your videos!
@Kytoryy-
@Kytoryy- 14 дней назад
Thank youu, I love you
@dawg2745
@dawg2745 11 дней назад
Could you make a video on your study methods and how realistic we should set our goals based on how much we study?
@user-ck9ti7vi5t
@user-ck9ti7vi5t 13 дней назад
This is just what I need
@PaladinLeeroy42069
@PaladinLeeroy42069 13 дней назад
Alternate title: How to Commodify Your Personal Values and Sell Your Soul to Academia feat. English Composition
@Inky_BeginnerFingers
@Inky_BeginnerFingers 13 дней назад
Bet that the admission officers cried as much as I did while reading her essay.
@user-gq5gq6ix5m
@user-gq5gq6ix5m 13 дней назад
I cried as well
@r22gamer54
@r22gamer54 10 дней назад
she said not to use a sob story, but she did a sob story....
@artsymie7231
@artsymie7231 8 дней назад
@@r22gamer54 yes, but she also noted how she overcame that situation which is more important
@Inky_BeginnerFingers
@Inky_BeginnerFingers 8 дней назад
@@r22gamer54 She is one of the strongest women I have ever seen
@Inky_BeginnerFingers
@Inky_BeginnerFingers 8 дней назад
@@artsymie7231 Exactly
@Mikeymouse1
@Mikeymouse1 13 дней назад
I might get into Stanford or Harvard because of you
@joelxyso
@joelxyso 13 дней назад
tips on freshman year of high school??
@ashleshachinchone3104
@ashleshachinchone3104 8 дней назад
I absolutely appreciate you and i love watching your videos , but there's a question i would love to get answered that how did u figured it out yourself was it natural that u wrote or do u know something only few poeple know ?
@Adina2244
@Adina2244 7 минут назад
I’m sorry, I’m not from the US, so probably I just don’t understand. Why should stuff as personal as the death of a parent matter to a UNI? I mean, I see the reason, but in Italy at least, all that matters is your knowledge and talent as a student. I for once have overcome uncommon challenges due to my physical disability, and that affected my whole life and person, but no one has ever granted me opportunities because I was resilient enough to adapt to that situation and still be an execellent student despite all the pain, physical and psychological. On the other side, I’ve lost opportunities and grades because I went through dark periods when I was just as brilliant but I needed more time, and I was penalized harshly for that. So, your statement is very well written, but I just don’t see why personal stuff shoul “open a door” for you. Of course I’d love not to be penalized for my difficult life experience, but I also don’t want to have any “special treatment”…
@manimagica
@manimagica День назад
Why am I watching this if I’m not a student anymore 😂
@MrMannyy
@MrMannyy 13 дней назад
girl's a organic super computer lmao
@dawg2745
@dawg2745 13 дней назад
You mind if I ask what A levels you took?
@slokapachava8081
@slokapachava8081 13 дней назад
Elise can you help me an example if my theme is the passing of my grandma and music (ps. She thought me karnitick music
@fatimasalman2805
@fatimasalman2805 9 дней назад
Is it possible to incorporate 2 metaphors instead of 1?
@dreamdream7456
@dreamdream7456 13 дней назад
i did the survey but i still didn't get the written course
@Ramenko1
@Ramenko1 11 дней назад
Hey, I just discovered you through a YT recommendation. Awesome video. You're also very attractive. Awesome! Hope we meet in irl one day 😎
@mikaelaklair4785
@mikaelaklair4785 22 часа назад
the personal statement is blurry… so i can’t read it
@lamiah.2938
@lamiah.2938 4 дня назад
Can it be used for uk unis?
@espheria8866
@espheria8866 8 дней назад
Hi Elise! Really sorry if this is an intrusive request but would we be able to see some more monthly income transparency vids? The newest ones that you made went down recently!
@ultimateivyleagueguide
@ultimateivyleagueguide 3 часа назад
hi! i removed them because I want my focus to be more on impacting others rather than personal income
@espheria8866
@espheria8866 2 часа назад
@@ultimateivyleagueguide That makes a lot of sense I understand! Sorry again for the request :)
@Zeediaries2
@Zeediaries2 8 дней назад
Stats reveal pls 😭
@AkshayaPalli-dz5vn
@AkshayaPalli-dz5vn 12 дней назад
What if somebody copies her personal statement??
@ultimateivyleagueguide
@ultimateivyleagueguide 11 дней назад
Admissions will detect it
@Goals996
@Goals996 22 часа назад
Why don’t you show use your common app🤦🏾‍♀️
@baiirene
@baiirene 13 дней назад
stats
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