The Worst Kinds of College Essays 

Hey I am an international student applying to fall 2023 and it has been a pleasure to enjoy all of your content throughout this past year. Thank you so much, you changed my life!

good luck with your essays everyone! you got this 💪

The application summary: “From maintaining a 4.0 gpa, to being the founder and president of 3 clubs, and being the captain of the football team I’d say I’m a good fit for your school”

Gohar, you’re an actual legend! As a junior in the US High School system, tips like these are AMAZING!!! Thanks for all you do!

I would love a part 2!! I am a little bit younger, a freshman in high school, but i love learning this type of stuff such as your college essays or tips for note taking!

Thank you so much Gohar!! I'm in junior year of igcse and this has been really helpful for me to gain perspective on how to write a unique college essay, please make a part 2. I would love more insight

You always give the best tips and as dómine who just started a newsletter I definitely will keep these tips in mind ❤

Thank you so much, I’m currently in my last year of high school, wondering about my future and those videos help a lot!

my tip after going thru college admissions last year: don't underestimate the prompts common app gives you! I know they can feel vague or it might be tempting to go off the board in an attempt to be unique but I used one of the prompts and it inspired a really great essay when I was originally had no clue on what to write about. definitely give them some thought before writing them off!

I’m planning on transferring to a university for the Fall 2023 and this is what I needed to see. Thanks!

I'm still in junior high school, and in the next 3 years, I'll be in college. Please keep uploading content like these because I'll be wanting your help so I could get into my dream school. Thank you so much ^^

This video is both educating and funny entertaining 😂😂.Keep it up Gohar !

"Pleaze accept me. I BEG YOU" 😭😭

I was wondering, if my topic could be a good one. Comparing myself to the instruments that i play, and how i controlled my emotions. And i got control of both my musical passion and my self doubt

When I write my essays this year your tips are gonna save me Gohar. 🙏 You already helped me go from a C average to a A-B average AP student with your study technics (honestly it was about the motivation you put in me) you may just single handedly make me a successful student yet!

Gohar, I don’t know if you’re gonna read this but I just wanted to thank you for your amazing and super helpful tips throughout the past two years for me. I am an international student in the IB program and I’m looking forward to apply in the next college application season. Continue with the fantastic work!

the pseudointellectual one is really interesting and funny to me, because i'm a creative writer who often write in a (purposefully) exaggerated style in my short stories, because i often write from perspectives of inanimate objects or animals--trees, air, dragons, horses, etc. because i write like this so often in my personal time, it was a huge struggle trying to write college essays. my style became something i actively had to reverse- instead of writing 'normally', from what i would say is my 'authentic self', i hard to wire myself to be as 'direct as i possibly can', just so that my points didn't get muddled up and read loike a literal creative writing story. i think my essay, especially my commonqpp, is still verging on the unconventional side. i'm really excited to see how it's going to go! anyways, as usual, thank you for the advice! you've helped me a lot with my essays this year. i am actually going to send in my ED Brown application in approximately 1 hour and 58 minutes. hopefully it will go good :D

Dear gohar, thanks a lot for everything. I'm a Bangladeshi student and I got graduate assistantship for the fall '23. I use to watch your videos during the whole application season and took the tips. Gratefulness. ✨

Thank you for all that you do to help us students get ready for college because of you we can go a step further in our high school and college admissions process. Thanks!

ABSOLUTELY NEED A PART II!! Thanks man

Gohar Khan uploaded another great full-length video? Christmas came early!

This was sooo helpful!!,

Really like your video, you are doing very good work by creating this kind of amazing content.

Great video, even though im still in middle school, your tips really help!

wow, you will be alot of help for my collage esssay! thanks alot

Chicken biryani

i kinda forgot that this dude makes regular videos and not just shorts

I'm gonna complete my undergraduate study soon. I watch you videos not because i need them, but because i love to hear you.

I am in 11th grade, my English is good but writing speech, essays have never been my thing. Idk how my grammar detoriate in while writing and the major issue is the chronology it's so difficult to place the main body of topic from start to bottom. I hope you understood what I said and it would be a lot better to make a video on it

Wow dude just stumbled across ur channel randomly and was shocked u got 1mil subs, Good Stuff bro!

Thanks Gohar!

You are helpful when it comes to essays.

Can you please make some videos on total self studying?! I’m preparing for my mdcat at home cause academies are so expensive here! I really don’t know how to study with THAT classroom vibe,teachers and my fellow students 😭

Omg, I just found you and you’re funny and so underrated! I’m gonna sub now!

Please make a part 2!!

Can you make a video on how to make a college essay make a person sound more intelligent without being a try hard?

Well, I actually have done an independent research project into my heritage. But I'm probably not going to go into genealogy. If I do want to find out more about my heritage, and get more perspective on it, even with all that I've done - I'll probably hire someone for it. I want to do many different kinds of things, that I could get in college, but I'm probably going to go with finance first.

Well, you got to be the best one to have ever talk in this such common type of video

I wish I had the chance to write a College essay, I would've just geeked about Three Kingdoms for the fun of it. But I got admitted without writing anything.

I like the background music added at different times in the video..

As someone in middle school, I have planned quite a bit ahead thanks to your help. You make really helpful and amazing videos, so thank you!

Thanks for sharing

I'd really like a part 2!

Hey gohar, what do you think about college essays that use their car as a metaphor for their life

Gohar, I've a question I wanted to ask you for a long time: what do you learn in CS?

Hey Gohar, can I list independent research in my ECs. BTW love your vids

this video is GOLD

Not relating to essays, but I want to ask how you got started in your data science journey

Flight of the Bumblebee by Rimsky-Korsakov at 2:51 🥰

Having to write essays for university is awful. I only been to less prestigious universities, and apply to grad school is easier than applying to undergraduate in prestigious universities.

2:53 flight of the bumblebeeee!

Hi Gohar, I have a request. Can you please make a video related to time management when you miss a few days of revision. When it was my friends b'day, I missed a whole day of revision. Please give us tips on how to cover it up

When in doubt, throw a research project at it

Thank you

As my Speech & Debate teacher likes to say, "Don't try to sound photosynthesis. Stop trying to sound fancy."

could you make a video about the best essays?

4:06 "who's wendy" me: WEN DEEZ NU-

*My teacher thinking I'm not gonna pass* Me who binge watch all of gohar's videos/shorts

Well I am still in Elementary School but I can still get smarter by you! I really want to be a teacher as well too.

As a 6th grader, I'm probably over-stressing about college apps, but your videos are insanely helpful and informational. Please make more of these...

Hey I am in a college that needs a lot of writing, how do I write the most in the least time? Because the exam time is not always enough to write

I need help learning how to start writing a college application and what to include in it

The biryani one was on other level.

If i am really into philosophy and use many word cause i write books, so i have large grammar vocabulary. I need to write it less fancy even if i am talking like so irl? P.s. I dont speak english well, so i can have grammar issues

2 years away from college and still watching:

PLEASE… GIVE US MORE!

this guy can save anyone

Da king is back baby he neva miss

Hey Gohar Can You Combine All The Things You've Told Us from Short Into One Long Video?

I just noticed that an essay is just like an resume, they don’t care how you feel.

Until this day, this was the first time I've ever seen you in a video.

Please I really need help I’m filling my college application and for the option of the program, I want to do premed, should I choose the premed option or choose biology. I’m an international student and I don’t reaaly know how it works. Because I heard you should never choose premed as the program but just a track. Thanks

Yes, part 2 should be helpful

Can you do essay tips

im gonna write about how i taught myself how to draw and play electric guitar is that a great topic to write about?

Do you edit essay or just correct grammar/give review?

1 and a half years left until I will write my first College Essay. It’s gonna be tough, but worth it.

Do you think it's unhealthy to be obsessed with grades? And if yes, how big of a problem do you think it is?

Part two pls🙏🙏

Can you give some tips on fashion colleges essays

i wrote abt my life and how its connected to math and its creative process. is that any good?

Gohar, Washington UDUB is a university, not a college right?

Should you try being ahead of your class by using online sources so you are better prepared?

I can't tolerate insults to Chicken Biryani! Also, nice video, big ups Gohar!

Hey I wasn't doing well in my freshman year could that have a huge impact on my chances

Man any tips on how to study from scratch one day before exam and pass it

PT TWO PLS

Can you Please talk about how to go to Harvard or Oxford University

dude im from Algeria and i promise i am just so confused on what to do regarding college. Our school system is so outdated. All we get to choose is one "filliere" out of 14 or with only The sciences taken seriously being: *Natural and life sciences,* *Exact sciences,(i do this)* and *Technology: Civil engineering or Mechanical engineering or Electrical engineering* And those aren't even different we literally study the same curriculum except at different paces and at a kinda of different levels of depth. +Technology don't study Science instead they choose to study "X" type of engineering or . I don't get how to apply for college now. ( i'm applying in Canada ) One word: *help*

The best channel ever

Can you suggest us the best topic to write about please

How do I spend my time studying with improvements.

2:54 Horrible stench from biriyani? Impossible.

Hey I'm a junior in high school and I'm a rape survivor and I want to write about it in my essay. Could you give me any tips for this specific topic?

Gohar kahn I am in the six grade and I am in math I need tips I might fail my teacher got in to a car reck this year and the sub teaches in a way that I don't understand an does tell me what I did Rong

Part 2 pleeeeeeese

what is ur 3x3 pb?

Hi Gohar, I am still in middle school( may seem a little young to all you high schoolers), but would your website be able to help with different types of middle school essays as well? Thx for all your videos

Tmrw is my final exam hope this works🤞

One thing to say. GOAT 🐐