Trochaic Meter, Anapestic Meter, and Rhyme Scheme in Rhyming Picture Books | Peek & Critique #1

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PEEK & CRITIQUE -- for writers of rhyming picture books, prose picture books, and children's poetry -- is a series that explores concepts taught in The Lyrical Language Lab online course, such as poetic meter, rhyme, sound devices, word choice, lyrical language, imagery, and scansion. I read and critique YOUR submitted writing samples of rhyming picture books, prose picture books, and children's poetry, explaining concepts along the way.
This is a FREE service for kidlit writers! You do not need to have taken my Lyrical Language Lab course to participate. This service is open to ALL kidlit writers!
In this episode, I look at three rhyming picture book samples and talk about iambic meter, trochaic meter, anapestic meter, imagery, and word choice.
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@lindakulptrout5896 4 года назад

Renee, it's so generous of you to share your expertise. Thank you so much!

@sandyperlic6438 4 года назад

What a great Lyrical Language Lab refresher! And I love that you are so kind and encouraging to those whose work you're critiquing.

@reneelatulippe1759 4 года назад

Thanks, Sandy! Funny to think you were among my first students -- it seems a lifetime ago! :D

@martylapointe-malchik209 4 года назад

Great to see this live analysis of meter, rhyme, and the demonstration of when a mess-with-the-stress error has occurred. I'm so grateful for the authors who, by submitting, help all of us hone our rhyming picture book craft.

@LyricalLanguageLab 4 года назад

YES! These are brave and generous authors indeed, Marty. I'm so glad you found the episode helpful. :)

@mycreativepowerhouse 4 года назад

What a wonderful gift to the writing community! Thank you for offering us such detailed analyses!

@LyricalLanguageLab 4 года назад

Grazie, cara! :)

@jreece2301 4 года назад

It's great to find analysis of this calibre and grateful to every writer who submits. Love learning!

@LyricalLanguageLab 4 года назад

I'm grateful to the writers too!

@lisakatzenberger8469 4 года назад

Thank you so much for sharing your time and expertise Renee. This was so fun to watch!

@LyricalLanguageLab 4 года назад

Thank YOU for submitting your engaging snippet, Lisa! Best of luck with it!

@cindywilliamsschrauben2877 4 года назад

Nice job, Lisa

@lisakatzenberger8469 4 года назад

@@cindywilliamsschrauben2877 Thanks Cindy!

@rediff9819 2 года назад

This is really awesome. I'd been searching for this kind of video for a long time. It really amazes me to see how you effortlessly scan those stressed and unstressed syllables and eventually figure out the metre in which the poem is written. As for me, I have to refer to dictionary for almost every word, particularly polysyllabic, to make sure if the syllable (which sounds stressed) is really stressed. Your way of explaining things is lucid and interesting. Do keep making more videos.🙏

@LyricalLanguageLab 2 года назад

I'm so glad you find the videos helpful! :)

@katiemeline9400 4 года назад

Renee, you are my go-to resource for everything rhyme! Thanks so much for doing these videos.

@LyricalLanguageLab 4 года назад

I'm so happy to hear you find the videos helpful, Katie! Yay!

@mmarshall9606 4 года назад

I agree that this was a great refresher! Thank you so much Renee for taking the time to evaluate the poems.

@jacobrozansky8225 Год назад

BEST CHANNEL EVER! You are an amazing teacher. I love all the nerdy stuff! Great variety and I’m so excited to finish this series! Message to writers: Finish your book before editing it! Paralysis by analysis! Good luck everyone ❤

@LyricalLanguageLab 10 месяцев назад

Wow, thank you so much for your comment. And that is GREAT advice, so thank YOU!

@jkwaldman66 4 года назад

Renee, this is wonderful! Looking forward to the next session : D

@rebeccahirsch 4 года назад

This is such a helpful analysis, and so positive. Thank you for offering this!

@gabisnyder_author 4 года назад

Fantastic! Thank you so much for sharing your expertise, Renee!

@LyricalLanguageLab 4 года назад

Glad you found it helpful, Gabrielle!

@ryanroberts3623 4 года назад

Wow- this was a great refresher! Excited to keep watching these, to continue to keep it all fresh in my mind

@LyricalLanguageLab 4 года назад

Yay! I'm glad you found it useful, Ryan!

@michellewoodstudio 4 года назад

LOVE this Renee! Thank you so much.

@LyricalLanguageLab 4 года назад

Thanks for watching, Michelle!

@kirstenwlarson 4 года назад

What a wonderful way to keep in touch with all we've learned in Lyrical Language Lab. I can't recommend the course enough.

@LyricalLanguageLab 4 года назад

Thank you, Kirsten!

@sharondalgleish1623 4 года назад

Wow! This was so helpful! Thank you!

@nurseneeneeseries2573 Год назад

This is much needed as I'm working on a rhyme book! Thank you for your honest and FREE critique!

@LyricalLanguageLab 10 месяцев назад

You're welcome!! Best of luck with your manuscript!

@sherririvers435 4 года назад

Oooh, I learned so much. Renee, you are a master. A lot packed into that teaching video.

@LyricalLanguageLab 4 года назад

Grazie, Sherri!

@hifiunicorn 2 года назад

So glad I found this channel! This is wonderful 🙂

@peachyfx2899 4 года назад

THANK YOU! This is exactly what I needed.

@LyricalLanguageLab 4 года назад

Glad it helped!

@TeresaRobeson 4 года назад

Brilliant analyses!!

@LyricalLanguageLab 4 года назад

Thank you, my dear!

@mmagella 4 года назад

Really helpful! Thank you!

@jbn9029 2 года назад

Thank you. This was very informative. This was so technical. I had not realized the technical aspects behind children book rhyming.

@LyricalLanguageLab 2 года назад

I'm glad you found the video helpful! :) Writing in metered verse, although not an exact science, is indeed quite technical, but once you get the hang of it, it comes pretty naturally.

@LakotaCat Месяц назад

Great info. Thank you

@cindywilliamsschrauben2877 4 года назад

Great refresher, Renee. Thank you!

@sherryhoward.author-and-coach 4 года назад

Love watching a master at work!

@LyricalLanguageLab 4 года назад

Thank you for those kind words, Sherry. :)

@karolitadotcom 3 года назад

A lot of this is over my head. Just here to tell you I love your pronunciation of the word fissura :)

@LyricalLanguageLab 3 года назад

Ha! Where do I say that ... and why?? I have no recollection, hahaha. Or do you mean "caesura"...? Either way, thank you! It's the Italian influence. 😂

@karolitadotcom 3 года назад

@@LyricalLanguageLab 🤦🏻‍♀️ ho dimenticato il Italiano

@dannayork8240 4 года назад

So great!! Why do you not count syllables-what would you do then?? Thanks!!

@LyricalLanguageLab 4 года назад

@Danna York - I will do a video soon about counting syllables vs. counting feet!

@msutcliffe5883 Год назад

3 mins in and I've subbed 😊

@LyricalLanguageLab Год назад

Yay! I'm so glad you like the content! :)

@judycooper2925 3 года назад

I subbed!

@LyricalLanguageLab 3 года назад

Thank you, Judy! But be sure to check in on the actual 1000 Subs video to see if you win the giveaway (this is the wrong video). 😂 You're entered!

@sherylbearman7694 2 года назад

This has been very helpful. How do I submit to poem to you for a picture book? I think I have the meter correct but ???

@LyricalLanguageLab 2 года назад

Do you mean how to submit for Peek & Critique? Here's the link: www.reneelatulippe.com/peek-critique/ Please be aware, though, that there's no guarantee I will use your work in a video. :)

@jhall6155 3 года назад

Very informative - thank you! Why is inversion frowned upon? Is this just for picture books or always?

@jhall6155 3 года назад

Also, unrelated to poetry - I loved the "don't mess with stress." I'm from the west coast and married a southern boy. He stops at the RED light; I stop at the red LIGHT. (Admittedly, his makes more sense in that case.) In the rain, I use an umBRELla. He uses an UMbrella. Ha ha. Ok, off to listen to Stop Counting Syllables. Thanks again!

@LyricalLanguageLab 3 года назад

@@jhall6155 Ha! UMbrella is so funny!

@LyricalLanguageLab 3 года назад

Because it's just not natural speech, and yes, I would say not to use it anywhere. When you see it in rhyming verse in particular, it screams that the author didn't know how to revise the line to rhyme correctly, or that the author is a novice.