Hey, I'm the original writer of that story. Not here to justify myself, just explain a few things about my story. First, I'm a girl, and was in no way doing any form of self insert through any of the characters. I get how it can sound like it, especially considering how the casual reddit user is seen, but here that wasn't it. Second, it's stupid, but I'm pretty new at writing, especially in English, so it can reflects in the way I'm expressing things. Third, in the following chapters of that series, it is revealed that Joshua is entirely asexual. Knowing myself a good number of asexual people, the character of Joshua was a way for me to channel a lot of their feelings towards that kind of things. Elizabeth, and the ghost, going at him that way puts some pressure on him, and, while not saying it's disgusting, because that's not how asexual people usually work, he states himself that he didn't really enjoyed these moments that much, but maybe the way I wrote it wasn't clear enough... To finish, I'll just say that I'm kinda mad that he narrated that series, because it's arguably my worst one😂. It's honestly pretty inconsistent and has a bad rythm, and a lot of messages I wanted to tell were handled poorly, so I get your criticisms. If you care just a little bit, I would advice you to check my profile on reddit, where you can get the full picture of things. Anyway, have a good day!
What makes me mad at the second story is not the fact that it’s sounds like the biggest cap I’ve ever heard but the fact that people in the comments actually believe it happened. Edit: I just wanna say that I’m glad I’m not the only one who is baffled by the utter nonsense of the second story like ok bro you wanna kiss popular girls and milf ghosts 😭
@@Certifiedpainuser2806 yeah the belief one can have for a reddit story is very slim but you can at least try to make it grounded But when it becomes a fanfiction about you making out with dead girls nobody takes it seriously as a real story or as a piece of writing
Hey, I'm the original writer of that story. Not here to justify myself, just explain a few things about my story. First, I'm a girl, and was in no way doing any form of self insert through any of the characters. I get how it can sound like it, especially considering how the casual reddit user is seen, but here that wasn't it. Second, it's stupid, but I'm pretty new at writing, especially in English, so it can reflects in the way I'm expressing things. Third, in the following chapters of that series, it is revealed that Joshua is entirely asexual. Knowing myself a good number of asexual people, the character of Joshua was a way for me to channel a lot of their feelings towards that kind of things. Elizabeth, and the ghost, going at him that way puts some pressure on him, and, while not saying it's disgusting, because that's not how asexual people usually work, he states himself that he didn't really enjoyed these moments that much, but maybe the way I wrote it wasn't clear enough... To finish, I'll just say that I'm kinda mad that he narrated that series, because it's arguably my worst one😂. It's honestly pretty inconsistent and has a bad rythm, and a lot of messages I wanted to tell were handled poorly, so I get your criticisms. If you care just a little bit, I would advice you to check my profile on reddit, where you can get the full picture of things. Anyway, have a good day!
everyone focusing on the second one, meanwhile I'm focused on the train in the room. my heart hit my feet as soon as I realized I had to pause - I genuinely felt sicker than I have in a while.
i second this, sometimes the story sounds so real at first then they say something so outrageous that you realize it’s fake and just lose interest in the story
@@monkeycontawell yeah, also fyi if you see r/nosleep at the top of stories then they’re fake, the point of the subreddit is to put fake horror stories there and pass them off as real and act like they’re real in the comments too, sometimes the stories are really good and fun but other times stories can be pretty cringe lol
Subscribed and I hope you enjoy making these videos and will continue to do so, best wishes from a random commenter. I hope that everyone will someday taste the fruit of their labor just don't give up on whatever you're doing (but you can give up on bad habits though) :)
So in the first story the guy says something about that they argued to loud that they could have gotten thrown out of their building, assuming one to believe they live in an apartment, then in the next paragraph he talks about how she got the house in the divorce. I'm calling bullshit on this story. And that's long before I heard about the goat woman
as stories go, the second one was a fantasy ride of a teenager and purely that. i dont think you will be able to kiss with half an inch deep wound in your knee with the nail causing the wound still in there. that was so funny it took me out of the story immediately.
I'm actually kinda mad and confused why everyone is talking about the second story and not the last one, I get that the second one is a bit silly but that last one just hits hard and leaves a pit in your stomach.. Those two rooms must've been awful to go into as a child not understanding what's going on or why, or even worse *knowing exactly* what was about to happen and not being able to do anything about it. My heart goes out to those poor kids who had to go to those rooms....
As a piece of constructive criticism, I think going forward it would be best if you added a natural pause between sentences. The story seems to go so fast at least in the beginning to the point that I can’t quite make out where a sentence starts or ends. It’s feels almost unnatural.
The guy in the 2nd story was a not so bright he said he had internet access, so why not look up some prayers? Christian, Muslim, Jewish, Hindu and so on. Better to try them all then die and do nothing.
So dude brought his EMF meter but then doesn’t mention it again at all. And did the old woman just go to take out the trash and disappear? She was seemingly completely oblivious to any “activity”.
I guess I dissociated during the ghost kissing story cause I’m only two stories past it checking the comments and have zero recollection of that goofy ass story 💀
Love your stories! Just a little tip. Sometimes I hear to your stories while working and I miss a sentence or 5. No problem. But you have no sound or anything between stories. So it’s really confusing when I pick it up again and it’s a completely different story. Bebusta or Mrnightmare have a heartbeat sound in between stories which when heard unconsciously tells me it’s a different story!
Literally what I was thinking haha! My mom lived in Okinawa when she was in the military and told me that the men on the base were warned to avoid that place at ALL COSTS or they’d get pushed off of the cliff. I think it’s interesting how different cultures around the world have similar stories…
Literally just commented about this lol! it’s so cool how similar they are considering it was in the 80s (pre internet) so the old Japanese woman presumably had no idea about La Llorona!!
Never been this early to a video, it's currently 5am for me (I live in Australia) and I love your videos, especially these Reddit stories, keep it up man
