Never heard this song before, but I really like it and how it fits the way Charity feels about Vanessa, to this day. You really chose some great scenes!!! It's good to see that someone still has enough emotional investment in these two to put together something new!!! Have no idea how much hard work went into this, I only know I wouldn't even know where to start, in order to put something like this together! Although I certainly wish I could!! Then I wouldn't be writing this right now, but putting my energies into trying to do it myself. LOL. At any rate... can I offer a bit of what I mean to be constructive criticism? And please don't take this wrong way, okay? It's just quite hard to hear the dialogue over the singing. Maybe it's just me, but do you think it might make it a bit better not to have so much audible dialogue in the background, except in the quiet parts of the song? And to save most of the best ones til the end, maybe? Such as "I stupidly and completely love you", followed by "the best version there is of me", "Will you be my wife", then the scene with Diane, where Charity says something about Vanessa bringing out the best in her. Then jump to the newer, "Not like it was with us...." And finally at the very end, when she's talking to Cain, she says something about 'It's Vanessa...." followed by "I love her. More than anyone I've ever loved in my life." This way it's easier to hear the dialogue and those few lines ultimately sum up why Charity doesn't know... "How Not To". Whaddaya think? Can you look at this as a request or maybe even a challenge and... just see what happens, maybe?
So how long would it take for Vanessa to forgive charity and come home because like charity says her life is better with Vanessa in it and I think so too she bring out the best in her
