This editing is actually very creative and funny. However if i were to give some feedback i would say that it would be a good idea to keep stuff happening on screen. The 5 second rule is EVERYTHING on youtube (MrBeasts gives it the credit for his sucess). So for example at the Jinx Rocket animation and the TF alt animation at the start. Maybe put that 'bit' over something else happening on screen, or make the 'bit' shorter entirely to keep up the dopamine for the viewer.