In my opinion, you’ve had the best representation of this monologue that i could find! All the other ones were much more comedic while I always read it as much more confused. This was really good thank you!
The BBC film was tops in my opinion but this monologue was excellent and the facial expressions and the display of the different emotions was well acted. Viola's costume should have been more manly but that only a minor issue.
One suggestion: You are rushing the whole monologue. Its going too fast. Please slow down a bit. Bcoz the expression epwere being hidden since the act was going fast.
