Okay. How do I put this. I get what you're going for. I do. And it's great. Very slick, The Good Place/RU-vid style humor. Big fan. *scratches head* You're just like...SLIGHTLY slow on your delivery. Part of the humor comes in having little to no time to really chew on the absurdity of any particular thing said, and your slower paced approach is tending a bit closer to cringe? You're on the right path, man! Just speed up the jokes fractionally and you'll be golden. Editing is absolutely on point. That's no easy task. Notice you corrected the early mouse pointer. Mad bonus points there. Looking forward to seeing you develop.
