I can use shock value in my videos if I want to, I don't want to hear the whining. "Oh shock value bad, shock value bad, I'm such an authority on what works in horror, wa wa wa" GET A LIFE.
This has loads of potential but the creepiest part imo was before you started talking. The heavy breathing and the 'found footage' aspects really reminded me of a lot of that one video of the british guys in the car on the never ending country road? I forgot what it's called, but hopefully you've seen it or can find it. I think that given the formatting and the found footage elements though, you could totally make something creepy on the basis that its someones tiktoks living in the neighbourhood/vicinity of some threat that's not revealed until a few videos later. If you reveal the threat or monster immediately, you lose a lot of tension.
@lunos5026 It's called no through road. And that's such a coincidence because I just watched it the other night. And your right on, I'll try making a video where I do this kind of a thing but don't talk, thanks for the suggestion and valid criticism.
@@red_sir You're allowed to experiment with what works content wise. I think with modern RU-vid there's this emphasis on a perfect end product. Making mistakes and being occasionally cringe is part of making content/doing creative stuff in general