Love your what if stories so much. There very well written and always a pleasure watch. This is now one of my favorite Anakin Skywalker what if stories.
What if Revan wasn't found in stasis until the first year of the clone wars? That would mean that Revan in his prime would be alive and well, and Darth Vitiate's spirit would still be dormant since Revan didn't awake his spirit at Yavin.
A very interesting and intriguing fix it fic, however, if you don't mind me saying so, and please take this as what it is, a critique, NOT an attack, but your voice can be very flat sometimes. While it's good to have proper cadence and flow in your voice, when telling a story, it's just as important for your voice to be expressive. I also notice that you pronounce Je'daii in a number of different ways: "Jay-Die" "Jeh-dah-yee" "Ji-dai" when speaking, it's important to pronounce things the same way throughout, or it will be noticeable. Apart from the above, very well done! You're very clear, and you don't trip over your words. Your reading/speaking pace is very understandable which is great, another Star Wars What if... youtuber I frequently listen to is Pente Patrol, and some of their earlier stuff is almost not understandable with how fast the speaker talks and trips over themselves, making it very hard to listen to, no matter how interesting the material.
Can you do if Luke Skywalker met Mara Jade in the Return of the Jedi, she's helping him defeat Darth Vader(Bringing him back to the light side of the Force, as White Vader/Armored Anakin Skywalker) and the Emperor Palpatine on the Second Death Star next time?
The Je’daii is pronounced differently than the Jedi. They are two different groups. The Je'daii were an ancient order of Force users who sought balance between the light and dark sides of the Force, predating the Jedi Order. They followed the philosophy of the Bendu, maintaining harmony within themselves and the galaxy by embracing both aspects of the Force.
What if Jaina Solo Fel from Star Wars Expanded Universe went to the Disney Star Wars sequels to fight against Rey and Kylo Ren and defeats them with a Lightsaber and Jaina Solo won.
What if Anakin had a vision of the entire future IF so he saw the fall of the jedi order, the rise of the empire, the rise and fall of darth vader, the birth of the new republic, the rise of the new jedi order, the invasion of the yuuzhan vong, the rise Of galactic alliance, and the rise of the Sith rule of one.
What if Maul told Pre Vizla about Sideous and how he wanted to take over the galaxy and this made them not betray eachother because of a bigger enemy in Sideous.And of course Dooku because let's not forget Dooku made Grevous pillage Mauls world I'm sure Maul dose not like that all too well and the fact Dooku replaced him.
I enjoyed this and even added it to my what ifs folder, but...in my opinion the ending seemed rushed from when they returned to Dagobah. I'd have liked to see how Obi-Wan and Yoda come to terms with true balance. Maybe Ahsoka could have been there given how things would have played differently with Order 66. Yoda did ultimately fail the Order, dude had extreme baggage. And I highly doubt Obi-Wan would have let Anakin go anywhere without him. Perhaps a part 2 with more details upon returning to the known galaxy? Would the Jedi turn to the ways of Balance or would some of them continue to embrace the dogmatic ways of the Jedi? I understand that this was about Anakin's personal journey, but there are also people that he holds close to his heart. They are as integral to his life as Padme is. Just my two cents on the matter. And besides, who doesn't like to see Palpatine go crazy when things don't go the way he wants? :-)
Je'daii were cool and all but they discredited themselves. They had the same problem as the later Jedi. They also had a schism with dark side users that almost went real bad for everyone involved and did go real bad for Tython. The problem with Jedi isn't dogma, their dogma is 100% right. The problem was that they got corrupt because of being too close to Senate.
What if Galen merrick/ Starkiller was the son of darth vader and ahsoka ( better do it before Disney does for ahsoka Season 2 and have that Revolution )
What if the yuuzhan vong Started their invasion during the last year of the clone wars ( I can tell you one thing padme would die During Siege of Coruscant and If she has the twins I think the only person that would be able to take care of them would be Ahsoka Because anakin Would be too busy In this new war )
Well thinks guys its really cool that I would make that happen plus Jaina Solo is the best Character In Star Wars Expanded Universe aka The EU way better then Rey in Disney's Star Wars Plus Rey is a Mary Sue and Jaina Solo is the best because she used the Force With Training by her uncle Luke Skywalker in his Jedi academy and Rey she used the force without training because she's over power herself, this is why I hate Disney Star Wars and I also hate Rey Skywalker, I really love Jaina Solo Fel because she is the one true Female Star Wars Expanded Universe Character ever. She is the Daughter of Princess Leia and Han Solo.
First order this guy believes in Disney's star wars the first order was a cheaper way to make the last 3 episodes of star wars cheaper to make in live action as the usongvong (can't spell it) that George Lucas had planned also they destroyed Luke's Jedi order
Great story! very thought out and well put together. I would pay to see this. While it erases the OG trilogy, it opens the door for so much. It’s sad that fans can sit down and write this kind of story while a room full of paid grifters write out whatever the hell Disney has written and put on camera. Crazy. Stories like this and what SWTheory does offers some bit of a future for SW fans. Thank you
As we know darth vader was a natural engineer and could use mechaguru or whatever so what if he used skill to create nanobots to repair his lungs and burns while also making limbs that could conduct the force to make lightning. This could relate to inquisitor baris as she used nanobots in the bomb and he may remember nanobots and their uses. He could could also conduct experiments diguised as torture to fool sidious, learning to heal wounds, make force sensitive droids/limbs and using nano bots to manipulate mididclorians to strip or enhance the force in individuals. What I was thinking was that he used nanobots to remove scar tissue especially around the lungs and he would be dipped in bacta or bacta would be applied this would allow him breath which means he can meditate more deeply. And for the limbs, it is possible to make material force sensitive and I was thinking he make limbs skeletal looking like in attack of the clones but would then cover the we either grafed flesh from his body or flesh made from his blood and other ingredients like perhaps kyber crystal this would make the force flow from him easier and perhaps with the sith alchemy in the limbs making his force lightning more powerful. Basically an uber vader who is perhaps stronger than full potential anakin.
What if darth vader went to darthomir to learn. New suit or perhaps more unique powers. Resurrect talzin maybe. what if Vokara Che became a mentor to anakin as anakin was being treated for bullying and trauma from being a slave. What if anakin fell in love with luminara unduli, serra keto or bultar swan. What if anakin was taught by agen kolar or sasee tin or adi gallia.
What if anakin spirit in the world between worlds saved padme by making her a force ghost or new mother if the ones. She could make him help ben solo and others saying you got to help people who are suffering from your past actions. What if anakin was piloting before attack of the clones and sensed ventress fall to the darkside as her master died and took his ship to the planet to investigate. Perhaps starting a romance as they are very similar in their stories. Also what if ahsoka taught ben skywalker as she saw him as history repeating itself. What if anakin was a jedi watchmen or wayfinder. What if anakin went with kenobi to face maul and savage instead of adi gallia. What if anakin fell in love with luminara or your own version of aayla secura romance. What if oppo rancis trained anakin. What if anakin met and fell in love with ventress just before the clone wars just after her masters death. What if anakin became a jedi sentinel like a watchmen or one of those who find younglings. What if evan piel became a mentor or second master to anakin. Or anakin became a healer either before or after his mother death could be related to his friendship with offee or alternatively what if he was trained by tra sa who taught windu and actually did not forbid attachment as shown by her relationship with tholme , they could become like a pseudo parents to anakin and train him away from the temple in azati martial arts and from trasa the living force as she is a plant lady so imagine anakin controlling plant life.
What if jocasta nu helped obi wan with anikan training providing texts and knowledge on the force and the original version of the code. Were obi wan can provide training about combat he does not possess knowledge of the higher mysteries which nu does such as force healing which would be useful in attack of clones. Plus it would anakin greater resources for learning and may become a consular or at least a sentinel instead of a guardian. All this could happen because of instead of sending anakin to his room where he just tinkers they send him to work in the library where nu will give him more discipline and may take a maternal interest.
What if Rako Hardeen shot and killed Anakin instead of Obi-Wan and when Ahsoka finds out that the jedi council made that plan she turns into the emperor's apprentice?
What if anakin was found by jedi belonging to another sect like corelia or those nomadic jedi who allow attachment. What if anakin went to dathomir in revenge of the sith to search for ways to save padme. What if yoda decided to swap the masters of ferus olin and anakin. So anakin with siri. Obi with ferus What if ahsoka and anakin crash landed on bendu's planet. Also what if darth vader joined thrawn in meeting the bendu and went on a spiritual journey back to the dust ball tatiotene. What if the whills turned padme into a literal force angel to save vader.
The Je'daii were an ancient order of Force users who sought balance between the light and dark sides of the Force, predating the Jedi Order. They followed the philosophy of the Bendu, maintaining harmony within themselves and the galaxy by embracing both aspects of the Force.
@cecilarthurton3795 I'd imagine if that were the case, she'd be the more dominant one of the two using his love for her to make him submit to her...even using a dildo on him to assert her dominance on him.
