Last time I listened to this, it ended right after the class reps were selected, so already you have gone a little bit farther then that other one. I hope there's more so you can post a part 2.
This isn't a critique of this story specifically, but of Fan Fics in general, Why do so many start out telling us things that if your reading a fan fic you most likely already know. It's a waist of their time writing it and ours listening to/reading it.
