I like this I think you should make another one. Also suggestions are for if you’ve going to do a pairing you don’t have it to be Hata one hey, who knows? Maybe you can put in either food you could tell or make it kind of funny make it, his mom, then again he does go to the hospital high school girl in the corner or a boy that would be funny too. Also, I suggested it was gold.
Minato and Jiraiya are both fools. Only kushina and tsunade have common sense. Putting your village safety over your own children is really stupid. There's an alternative version of this story, with some changes.
